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Array ( [sid] => 127613 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bleed a Work of Art [time] => 2006-10-30 14:23:54 [hometext] => i wrote this in class today..idk why i feel so hopeless [bodytext] => let me go let me go
let me die in peace
take away my pain
my life has been ceased

let me go let me go
let me be at rest
i have nothing left
..i am nothing but a pest

let me go let me go
i am a burden to you
please dont feel guilty
there was nothing you could do

let me go let me go
its time to say goodbye
you really dont need me
i'm not worth any tear you cry

let me go let me go
today is my last day
you've stolen my heart
but i promise you'll be okay

LET ME GO LET ME GO
LET ME CUT MY WRISTS APART
I CANT DO THIS ANYMORE
LET ME BLEED A WORK OF ART [comments] => 4 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 36 [informant] => xforever_faking_a_smile3x [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Bleed a Work of Art

Contributed by xforever_faking_a_smile3x on Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 02:23:54 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

let me go let me go
let me die in peace
take away my pain
my life has been ceased

let me go let me go
let me be at rest
i have nothing left
..i am nothing but a pest

let me go let me go
i am a burden to you
please dont feel guilty
there was nothing you could do

let me go let me go
its time to say goodbye
you really dont need me
i'm not worth any tear you cry

let me go let me go
today is my last day
you've stolen my heart
but i promise you'll be okay

LET ME GO LET ME GO
LET ME CUT MY WRISTS APART
I CANT DO THIS ANYMORE
LET ME BLEED A WORK OF ART

Copyright © xforever_faking_a_smile3x ... [ 2006-10-30 14:23:54]
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Re: Bleed a Work of Art (User Rating: 1 )
by Sio on Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 03:05:05 PM AEST
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Your poem is beautiful. And I know everyone feels like that at one point or another. I hope you feel better and you find some strength from somewhere.

Re: Bleed a Work of Art (User Rating: 1 )
by donttrytofixme on Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 05:55:02 PM AEST
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i know how you feel, i get this way, and there is nothing no one can do i just wish that someone could help. Instead of ppl hurting me more, i want them to notice!

Re: Bleed a Work of Art (User Rating: 1 )
by BobbyZimmerman on Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 06:06:18 PM AEST
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Wow, I just wrote a poem about the same emotions, relating to my drug abuse. I think you articulated it much better than I did. Excellent job.

Re: Bleed a Work of Art (User Rating: 1 )
by brittaney on Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 06:20:08 PM AEST
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you have a very colorful choice of words. Nice words. (ANd i think everyone has felt like this at one time or another) Brittaney~

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