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Array ( [sid] => 1276 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Brolly Girls! [time] => 2002-07-29 06:18:29 [hometext] => This may not be politically correct! But they've just brightened my day at the Brands Hatch round of the World Superbikes, in England and you don't have to read this, do you! You have been warned! [bodytext] => Neath their brolleys
They stand upon the line
These lovely ladies
My word they shine

With glamorous looks
So aesthetically pleasing
I feel for the racers
They must be so teasing

Green light and then off
To get the racing line
So quickly having to
Clear their minds

I don’t know how
They concentrate
If it were me
I’d brake too late

Those Brolly girls
Looking so fine
I dream of just one
To drop me a line! [comments] => 7 [counter] => 240 [topic] => 38 [informant] => Unaekseveer1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Tributes )

Brolly Girls!

Contributed by Unaekseveer1 on Monday, 29th July 2002 @ 06:18:29 AM in AEST
Topic: Tributes

Neath their brolleys
They stand upon the line
These lovely ladies
My word they shine

With glamorous looks
So aesthetically pleasing
I feel for the racers
They must be so teasing

Green light and then off
To get the racing line
So quickly having to
Clear their minds

I don’t know how
They concentrate
If it were me
I’d brake too late

Those Brolly girls
Looking so fine
I dream of just one
To drop me a line!

Copyright Â© Unaekseveer1 ... [ 2002-07-29 06:18:29]
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Re: Brolly Girls! (User Rating: 1 )
by chatabox on Monday, 29th July 2002 @ 06:36:52 AM AEST
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lol, I will allow you this one....cos its such a funny write!....nah, your just being healthy my dear..........hehehe

Re: Brolly Girls! (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Monday, 29th July 2002 @ 08:03:50 AM AEST
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Cheers Penny.

Re: Brolly Girls! (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 03:35:06 AM AEST
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Dean, I agree. You are just being a healthy guy. And I guess guys are aloud to think every now then ;) Just kidding. Now seriously this is a really good poem and I like it.
ShadowsCloud

Re: Brolly Girls! (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 04:05:14 AM AEST
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They're the best thing at a m'cycle race meeting, I dare any guy at such events to say that's not the main reason for going!:-)
Thankyou for liking this one Candice, I will try to concentrate on the racing next year! Honest!!

With love
Dean:-)

Re: Brolly Girls! (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 04:52:20 AM AEST
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Dean, I am sure you will try. But I don't think it will work. You are a guy after all. I will admit that the main reason I watch wrestling is to see the guys. But girl are aloud to think that way too.
ShadowsCloud

Re: Brolly Girls! (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 08:31:19 AM AEST
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I couldn't agree more Candice,
let's face it if you didn't think that way the human race would be in pretty deep doodoo's, non existant to be exact!
I just wish more women would be honest about this fact!
Thankyou for being so, I really do appreciate it.

With love
Dean:-)

Re: Brolly Girls! (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 08:41:17 AM AEST
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Dean, I am honest about that. Some times I am too honest about that. At least around my friends. My bestfriend has playfully slapped me a few times for something that I have said. I can be pretty graphic at times.
ShadowsCloud

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