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Array ( [sid] => 127561 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Now Your Gone [time] => 2006-10-29 03:29:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => What happened?
One minute you were here
Beside me
The next you were gone

All that was left was memories
Not a single photo
Not a single letter
Just a dead body

You pretended you were happy
You pretended that you were enjoying life
You never got the help you needed
You never got a chance

Instead you got the knife
Put it to your wrist
Cut to deep
killed yourself

The blood that poured on the ground
The blood that came from you
The blood that was so red
The blood that drenched your life away

The minute you were found
It was to late
You were out complety
Never to Return

The guilt that ran through me
How much I screamed
I cryed so hard
I could of killed myself

The minute you left
Life had no meaning
Without you in it
There is nothing to enjoy

But something happened that night
And now your gone
Never to Return
I cry myself to sleep at night

Your gone
I loved you
I miss you
Your gone forever [comments] => 3 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 13 [informant] => emochick121 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Now Your Gone

Contributed by emochick121 on Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 03:29:41 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



What happened?
One minute you were here
Beside me
The next you were gone

All that was left was memories
Not a single photo
Not a single letter
Just a dead body

You pretended you were happy
You pretended that you were enjoying life
You never got the help you needed
You never got a chance

Instead you got the knife
Put it to your wrist
Cut to deep
killed yourself

The blood that poured on the ground
The blood that came from you
The blood that was so red
The blood that drenched your life away

The minute you were found
It was to late
You were out complety
Never to Return

The guilt that ran through me
How much I screamed
I cryed so hard
I could of killed myself

The minute you left
Life had no meaning
Without you in it
There is nothing to enjoy

But something happened that night
And now your gone
Never to Return
I cry myself to sleep at night

Your gone
I loved you
I miss you
Your gone forever




Copyright © emochick121 ... [ 2006-10-29 03:29:41]
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Re: Now Your Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 05:26:53 AM AEST
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Gosh....what can I say?
This is just.... saddeningly, destructive...

Heart-wrenching...

I'm very sorry.



Re: Now Your Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 10:26:22 PM AEST
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wow, that sent shivers throughout my whole body. i am so sorry for your loss, kinda makes me feel guilty for considering it myself....but fantastic write, really felt your pain. good luck.

--talli


Re: Now Your Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by donttrytofixme on Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 05:59:27 PM AEST
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I feel this poem it hits close to home, my g/f her friends helped her od, and they all *****ed at me when i wanted to help her, wow what friends right. Neways, i feel that this way even though she didnt die, i feel what would have happened if i wasnt there, her friends would have killed her, i dont know i just think about that when i read ur poem




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