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memories
Contributed by
riverofwords
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Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 03:22:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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as I walk along the beach
watching he myraid colours of the sky
as the sun slowly sets
it reminds me of when we first met
the moon glides smoothly to its zenith
as we walked and talked
holding hands as lovers do
watching the the moon beams dance on the water
walk back to the house unaware of time
open the door hope you would be there
door opening you running and leaping into my arms laughing the way constantly did
my heart drops the doorway is empty
I am alone
later i lie in bed i lok to the empty pillow beside me
and remember how i ran my fingers through your hair ,gentle kiss,then drift off to sleep
i still sense the fragrance of you ,lingering
toss and turning every night, eventually cry myself to sleep
missing you ,hurting with a sadness deep and heart wrencing
what keeps me going is the love we shared
and the memories
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Re: memories
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 03:58:23 PM AEST
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| sad and beautiful, a good way to keep those memories alive, |
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Re: memories
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 04:03:51 PM AEST
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River, this is so touching...a beautiful write....
Memories is one of the things no one can take from us....
Jenni |
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Re: memories
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 05:07:40 PM AEST
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| awwwww........... |
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Re: memories
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by venkat on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 02:16:21 AM AEST
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| Even though this is a sad one .. it is wonderfully written..a most lovely poem of sweet and bitter memories.. thanks for sharing this one.. a lil question..have you read my passion fire? ..venkat |
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Re: memories
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 09:38:51 AM AEST
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| river of words, something I too have known and well captured in your sadness. It gets a little easier to bear but never dies away. |
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