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Array ( [sid] => 127559 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fill the Skies [time] => 2006-10-29 01:36:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>

Don’t tell me it’s all too hard
- I’ve been there too
and I’m smiling
- you’re looking up
but the world isn’t keeping you down
- you’ve just grown in that seat
those legs of yours still work
- you don’t like your plot
well, hell, get up you fool
- let’s walk and talk
find those things to make you smile
- I’ll come along for the ride
but don’t rely on me
- for I rely on no-one
and will give you help
- for your sake
because it means little to me
- but that the world owns one less
another free bird on the wing
- no stopping this freedom
just try to share the word
- so make the sky full
and they might smile back
- do you feel awake now?
Well, don’t tell me it’s all too hard
- I’ve been there too
and I’m smiling…

16/10/06 [comments] => 3 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 19 [informant] => one-curly-fry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

Fill the Skies

Contributed by one-curly-fry on Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 01:36:29 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Don’t tell me it’s all too hard
- I’ve been there too
and I’m smiling
- you’re looking up
but the world isn’t keeping you down
- you’ve just grown in that seat
those legs of yours still work
- you don’t like your plot
well, hell, get up you fool
- let’s walk and talk
find those things to make you smile
- I’ll come along for the ride
but don’t rely on me
- for I rely on no-one
and will give you help
- for your sake
because it means little to me
- but that the world owns one less
another free bird on the wing
- no stopping this freedom
just try to share the word
- so make the sky full
and they might smile back
- do you feel awake now?
Well, don’t tell me it’s all too hard
- I’ve been there too
and I’m smiling…

16/10/06

Copyright Â© one-curly-fry ... [ 2006-10-29 01:36:29]
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Re: Fill the Skies (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 02:13:19 PM AEST
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Tim,
I'm smiling too. I quite enjoyed your write. Very nice.
Peace and hugs,
Laura

Re: Fill the Skies (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 08:40:27 PM AEST
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this makes me feel happy!!
liek shatever bad thigns come there are always the skies to look to, it all gets better eventually!
yay!
:-D the smiley faces love you b/c you made them happy! :-D
hehe
Tim is an amazing poet!
*ashley*

Re: Fill the Skies (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 03:26:28 PM AEST
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very true and very up-lifting. I really like the flow of this write and how its so real and moving. great job!

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