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[sid] => 127528
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Classic I'm a Loser Love.
[time] => 2006-10-28 18:36:29
[hometext] => About a guy. Nightmare Before Christmas, Grateful Dead, it's weird the ways I get my points across XD The fact that I wear blue colored contacts gives the irony of the 10th stanza. The last 3 lines are fiction. **Questions? Message me!**
[bodytext] => Now I can't believe what I didn't realize. I once thought of you as difficult. now you're what I idealize. I can't escape this, because I've made it too serious. But I'd do anything to bury this down I'd die to stop feeling this delirious. Jack sings, "how could I be so blind? All is lost.... Where was I?" And I share the same mood of giving yourself dry, where everything's awry. "Try as I may, it doesn't last." she is saying The melody echoes off the floor I look up as I'm praying Even when you treat me special I know it's just as friends. And that makes it worse for me, like seeing a diamond through a camera lens. We sing to the same song, we both have the same sort of hurt. I swear, we're like two halves of the Grateful Dead on your tee-shirt I realized it when I noticed that we have the same unique color eyes. And I want to show you this writing, want you to read the reprise. [[ The overall theme. ]] It crawls up into my throat when I stand next to you. I swear, I can feel it. It makes my mouth hurt. The basic point is you're my desire. Tell me you miss me too. Spit me up from this fire. I'm making up tunes, the moon is up in the afternoon Singin' words like, "My mom told me I'm a loner. I'm a-loner. I'm alone." [comments] => 3 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 30 [informant] => sally-heart-jack [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => PoemsonBeauty )
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