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She says – I love the look on your face when you realize
that roses don’t mean a thing
from glamour boys like him –

Turns to the bathroom mirror and examines her
hair, melted amber in sweet caressing waves
eyes, green orbs of brilliance
and pouted sugar plum lips.
I ask – What about glamour girls like you? –

Pause…
her face contorts in a sadistic smile,
– Honey, don’t hate me because I’m beautiful –

The look on her face is priceless when I answer
– Beautiful, don’t hate me because I’m real –
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Vicarious

Contributed by keilantra on Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 03:05:13 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

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She says – I love the look on your face when you realize
that roses don’t mean a thing
from glamour boys like him –

Turns to the bathroom mirror and examines her
hair, melted amber in sweet caressing waves
eyes, green orbs of brilliance
and pouted sugar plum lips.
I ask – What about glamour girls like you? –

Pause…
her face contorts in a sadistic smile,
– Honey, don’t hate me because I’m beautiful –

The look on her face is priceless when I answer
– Beautiful, don’t hate me because I’m real –

Copyright Â© keilantra ... [ 2006-10-28 15:05:13]
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Re: Vicarious (User Rating: 1 )
by sally-heart-jack on Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 05:15:42 PM AEST
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This is like perfect! I agree with it, definitely/

The only thing I don't like about it is that I wish it was longer!! [but it's good because it's short and sweet]

I know people exactly like this, and like you know their beautiful, but you also know that you're a better person than them.

I like this, a lot and it's one of those poems I'll read again and again

Good job ^^ ^_^

Re: Vicarious (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 06:19:08 PM AEST
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Perhaps the two of you could together create a beautiful reality...now that would be real beauty. See how that works, Real + Beauty = A beautiful reality. It's your to create...

BigLoveMuchPeace

Re: Vicarious (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 08:44:11 AM AEST
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I like this poem mostly for your comeback.
I could'nt fall for someone with no substance.
But to each their own. Good luck , Truly , D

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