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Array ( [sid] => 127516 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Created A Monster [time] => 2006-10-28 11:43:26 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>
I walk with the living dead
and talk
with the severed heads
I laugh
then I pause
cause I never understand what was said,
In the crowd
I am just a face
frowning
as I struggle to stay in line
and not to lose my place.

When I am alone
I am oh so blue
as this swirling matrix
stresses
and makes me so confused,
was a time when I would smile
had conversations
without acting wild
but now I
often act in movie scenes
can't take no chances
no one must see the real me.

If someone gets to close
something
starts to flow
my heart skips a beat
my mind slowly cracks
as love gets bold,
though I wanna
touch and hold
and kiss a lovers sweet lips
sensually sway
and drift in the bliss
ahhhh...
I
I
I just can't help it
I start trasnformating
into the monster I created.

I hear The thunder
as a new storm begins
demons that are undercover
have awakened it once again,
the lightning strikes
and
in the reflecting light
you see the monster flex
and you are filled with fright. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 43 [informant] => secretwind [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

I Created A Monster

Contributed by secretwind on Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 11:43:26 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I walk with the living dead
and talk
with the severed heads
I laugh
then I pause
cause I never understand what was said,
In the crowd
I am just a face
frowning
as I struggle to stay in line
and not to lose my place.

When I am alone
I am oh so blue
as this swirling matrix
stresses
and makes me so confused,
was a time when I would smile
had conversations
without acting wild
but now I
often act in movie scenes
can't take no chances
no one must see the real me.

If someone gets to close
something
starts to flow
my heart skips a beat
my mind slowly cracks
as love gets bold,
though I wanna
touch and hold
and kiss a lovers sweet lips
sensually sway
and drift in the bliss
ahhhh...
I
I
I just can't help it
I start trasnformating
into the monster I created.

I hear The thunder
as a new storm begins
demons that are undercover
have awakened it once again,
the lightning strikes
and
in the reflecting light
you see the monster flex
and you are filled with fright.

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2006-10-28 11:43:26]
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Re: I Created A Monster (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissylee on Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 07:34:27 PM AEST
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unfortunately that monster gets relesased at times and then at times you are happy about it and there are other times you wish that monster had never been let back out when love isn't returned... and yeah i know how that feels at the best of times

Re: I Created A Monster (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 08:27:38 AM AEST
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Its very difficult to deal with
who we are when we can't
be who we wish to be. I
liked the poem and I think
I can relate a little. Take care ,
Truly , D

Re: I Created A Monster (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 08:28:00 PM AEST
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Hey honny, I'm home!
I see Mick hasn't combined your accounts yet.
Very good writing here. Don't know how I missed it.
Awesome work, my dear friend,
emy

Re: I Created A Monster (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Monday, 3rd August 2020 @ 04:53:11 PM AEST
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Good writing indeed

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