Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 21:17:22 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 127478 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Beautiful Goth Girl [time] => 2006-10-27 12:37:30 [hometext] => To my neice... [bodytext] => My Beautiful Goth Girl

Do the black lips take away the memories of past kisses?

Does the eyeliner hide the pain in your eyes?

Does the body art hide the scars of years ago?


Oh My Beautiful Goth Girl, if you could see what I see.

I see the pain behind your eyes and I see your scars.

I hope you realize that’s what makes you beautiful.


You have blossomed into the blackest of butterflies,

But yet, it’s the most beautiful butterfly I have ever seen.

You would not be you if you did not hide behind what you are,

You would not be the butterfly that I have watched spread her wings and fly.


I see you in my brightest of dreams, with black tears running down your cheeks,

I see you in my darkest of days, knowing that deep inside you share the same pain as I.

Oh My Beautiful Goth Girl, do you know how much we are alike?

I’ve always believed we shared the same soul, only yours is black on the outside and mine is held within.


I believe in you My Beautiful Goth Girl, I believe in your dreams, your heart, your soul and your pain.

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 309 [topic] => 13 [informant] => angelfreak [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
My Beautiful Goth Girl

Contributed by angelfreak on Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 12:37:30 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



My Beautiful Goth Girl

Do the black lips take away the memories of past kisses?

Does the eyeliner hide the pain in your eyes?

Does the body art hide the scars of years ago?


Oh My Beautiful Goth Girl, if you could see what I see.

I see the pain behind your eyes and I see your scars.

I hope you realize that’s what makes you beautiful.


You have blossomed into the blackest of butterflies,

But yet, it’s the most beautiful butterfly I have ever seen.

You would not be you if you did not hide behind what you are,

You would not be the butterfly that I have watched spread her wings and fly.


I see you in my brightest of dreams, with black tears running down your cheeks,

I see you in my darkest of days, knowing that deep inside you share the same pain as I.

Oh My Beautiful Goth Girl, do you know how much we are alike?

I’ve always believed we shared the same soul, only yours is black on the outside and mine is held within.


I believe in you My Beautiful Goth Girl, I believe in your dreams, your heart, your soul and your pain.





Copyright © angelfreak ... [ 2006-10-27 12:37:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: My Beautiful Goth Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 12:44:15 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
This was beautiful... I liked it..

Take care
Christina


Re: My Beautiful Goth Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by sally-heart-jack on Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 04:01:29 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Very cute.


Re: My Beautiful Goth Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 05:01:19 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I like this. It reminds me of ...well, me. Because I
am a goth girl. And like my b/f, he calls me his
"Beautiful Goth Girl". That's part of the reason I read this. lol
Peace be with you.

~Ravon~


Re: My Beautiful Goth Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Sio on Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 06:33:01 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I like this because it creates a tie that is usually severed due to steriotypes.




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com