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Array ( [sid] => 127469 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your love is my death [time] => 2006-10-27 08:04:27 [hometext] => This is an old poem that I just found in one of my notebooks. It looks kind of like the one by myloveisunconditional, but dont worry, i didnt steal it, thats me also. Please comment [bodytext] => My life was worthless
I was unsure
Then you came and stopped me
With your love so pure
I remember wishing
that i was dead
You came into the room
And took the gun from my head
You kept asking me why
As you started to cry
It hurt so bad
to see you so sad
turning my head in shame
I assured you that you werent to blame
Death is so hard to forgive
That is why I chose to live
Not that your gone
I keep wondering if you were wrong
Since you left
I only cried
Now my tears have begun to dry
when you said that you loved me
You apparently Lied
Now little part of me has died
My death will soon be in your hands
After all wasnt that you plan?
You set me free
You said goodby
So long dear love
Tonight I die
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Your love is my death

Contributed by lipsofanangel on Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 08:04:27 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



My life was worthless
I was unsure
Then you came and stopped me
With your love so pure
I remember wishing
that i was dead
You came into the room
And took the gun from my head
You kept asking me why
As you started to cry
It hurt so bad
to see you so sad
turning my head in shame
I assured you that you werent to blame
Death is so hard to forgive
That is why I chose to live
Not that your gone
I keep wondering if you were wrong
Since you left
I only cried
Now my tears have begun to dry
when you said that you loved me
You apparently Lied
Now little part of me has died
My death will soon be in your hands
After all wasnt that you plan?
You set me free
You said goodby
So long dear love
Tonight I die




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Re: Your love is my death (User Rating: 1 )
by annoiosa on Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 09:21:07 AM AEST
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Wow, that was really good....


Re: Your love is my death (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 10:34:10 AM AEST
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well done


Re: Your love is my death (User Rating: 1 )
by justinblue on Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 11:56:01 AM AEST
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I'm diggin it ......keep on keepin on


Re: Your love is my death (User Rating: 1 )
by Angelinaxofann on Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 01:50:07 PM AEST
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This is such a good poem.
It has so much meaning into it

Keep it up


Re: Your love is my death (User Rating: 1 )
by saj on Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 05:51:09 PM AEST
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that actualy made me cry....


Re: Your love is my death (User Rating: 1 )
by veenu on Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 06:50:28 AM AEST
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the last four lines shooted............great job thanx for sharing


Re: Your love is my death (User Rating: 1 )
by my_life_is_lost on Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 06:36:48 PM AEST
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this is a good poem... i can relate to it in many ways




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