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Array ( [sid] => 127453 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Summer’s Day [time] => 2006-10-26 21:22:09 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The sky of blueberry,
Tart and staining,
With clouds of marshmallow white,
Sweet and comforting,
The lemon burning brightly,
Permeating all it infuses,
The black birds fill up like chips of chocolate,
Melting into the glaze of lemonade,
The trees of the highest green,
Like a ripe watermelon filled with flavor,
The grass a deep apple green,
The scent of bitter sweet mother earth,
The tiny brown squirrels running to and fro,
Like the blending batch of brownies,
The gentle breeze flows yieldingly,
Like a crisp, fresh, glass of spring water,
Thus is the passing of a summer’s day,
Fulfilled with cherry faces,
And tasteful hello’s,
The cherry pie is made and ready,
Simply for people to enjoy,
Yet like the goodness of a grand feast,
The day goes as fast as it came.
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A Summer’s Day

Contributed by alison on Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 09:22:09 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

The sky of blueberry,
Tart and staining,
With clouds of marshmallow white,
Sweet and comforting,
The lemon burning brightly,
Permeating all it infuses,
The black birds fill up like chips of chocolate,
Melting into the glaze of lemonade,
The trees of the highest green,
Like a ripe watermelon filled with flavor,
The grass a deep apple green,
The scent of bitter sweet mother earth,
The tiny brown squirrels running to and fro,
Like the blending batch of brownies,
The gentle breeze flows yieldingly,
Like a crisp, fresh, glass of spring water,
Thus is the passing of a summer’s day,
Fulfilled with cherry faces,
And tasteful hello’s,
The cherry pie is made and ready,
Simply for people to enjoy,
Yet like the goodness of a grand feast,
The day goes as fast as it came.

Copyright Â© alison ... [ 2006-10-26 21:22:09]
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Re: A Summer’s Day (User Rating: 1 )
by one-curly-fry on Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 03:00:21 AM AEST
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This is an incredibly creative write!! I really like the use of food metaphors!! It has a nice pace to it too - like strolling through a summer park, taking it all in.
Very good write!
Unlike you though, summer's just starting for me!! I love summer!!

- Tim

Re: A Summer’s Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 05:18:05 AM AEST
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great imagery, well done

Re: A Summer’s Day (User Rating: 1 )
by whiteleo1984 on Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 07:45:09 AM AEST
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very nicely dun, luv ur use of words... great write

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