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[aid] => mick
[title] => I'd Miss You Still
[time] => 2006-10-26 17:24:16
[hometext] => Started on the second day, and finished after my return
[bodytext] => I only know I miss you now.
It never felt this strong before,
but I feel it pounding through my heart,
and in the sting of every tear.
Yet still my flesh will not believe,
it will not feel your warming skin,
for another thousand years.
(The thought is like a needle's sting)
I recoil from its metal touch.
The pain of longing bites within.
I feel it every time I speak,
in every broken indrawn breath,
and every whispered moment sweet.
And it never felt this strong before,
this silent tearing of my heart,
and the tears that never spill.
And even if I saw you now,
I know I'd miss you still.
[comments] => 13
[counter] => 601
[topic] => 48
[informant] => lostinmyself
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[score] => 38
[ratings] => 8
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => EmotionalPoetry
)
I'd Miss You Still
Contributed by
lostinmyself
on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 05:24:16 PM in AEST
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I only know I miss you now.
It never felt this strong before,
but I feel it pounding through my heart,
and in the sting of every tear.
Yet still my flesh will not believe,
it will not feel your warming skin,
for another thousand years.
(The thought is like a needle's sting)
I recoil from its metal touch.
The pain of longing bites within.
I feel it every time I speak,
in every broken indrawn breath,
and every whispered moment sweet.
And it never felt this strong before,
this silent tearing of my heart,
and the tears that never spill.
And even if I saw you now,
I know I'd miss you still.
Copyright ©
lostinmyself
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2006-10-26 17:24:16]
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Re: I'd Miss You Still
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by Sagefairy on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 05:33:24 PM AEST
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Beautiful Philly... Echoes things that I am feeling...
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Re: I'd Miss You Still
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by Honey56 on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 06:01:50 PM AEST
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This is a very nice write..Sweet and just beautiful.
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Re: I'd Miss You Still
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 06:48:38 PM AEST
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OMG Phyllis, I so loved how you wrote this piece. It was truly a touching write. That last line is haunting...
"And even if I saw you now,
I know I'd miss you still"
That just makes my heart ache. Beautiful.
Peace sis,
Laura |
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Re: I'd Miss You Still
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 10:39:25 PM AEST
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very sad
I feel the pain in this flow...
well done.
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Re: I'd Miss You Still
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by Willofree on
Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 09:56:21 AM AEST
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Your protrayal of pain and hurt is so powerful in this write, and the imagery so vivid. Great depth and emotion of sadness and loneliness
Well done, Philly
Will |
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Re: I'd Miss You Still
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 07:24:05 PM AEST
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that poem speaks to me!
wow..amazing job!
keep it up~ |
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Re: I'd Miss You Still
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 06:27:18 PM AEST
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PhillyGirl~ such sadness engulfs my heart and tears fill my eyes as I read your painful and heart breaking write. You my dear friend are an extraordinary person so special and unique in her own little ways. It saddens me to know how hurt and pained your heart really is. I wished I could take it all away from you my dear friend and bring out the rainbow of love and happiness to fill your beautiful, but aching heart. I know at times you look and think oh gosh when is it gonna get darn better. Be patient dear friend and good things come to those who wait. We are put on trials through life to learn and become stronger. You dearest Philly are a strong, good hearted and determined young lady. You can reach for what you strive for~ You have it within you. May life & love be kind to you sweet PhillyGirl~
An eternity of love and happiness to you~
take care my dear friend.
love, hugs n prayers,
Sue M |
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Re: I'd Miss You Still
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 07:51:52 AM AEST
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Sweets .. forgive me for being so late to this. Hun, I feel such despair and
pain within these lines. I wish, you never had to feel the sting of this kind of
hurt. Your words have captivated my heart, dearest poet. I am trapped
within the mix of all that is you here.
I admire your audacity hun and am so proud of how brave you are. And continue
to be, through all that you must endure. Life, for you, though pained and trying
shall shine brilliantly. Your kind ways, and loving heart will seal your fate.
Your strength is a neverending wonder and inspiration.
Miss you ~
*hugs*
~Breezy |
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Re: I'd Miss You Still
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 03:00:09 PM AEST
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Such beauty and longing Philly!
Very, VERY felt!
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Re: I'd Miss You Still
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by wizard on
Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 10:47:58 AM AEST
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very touching and beautifully written,
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Re: I'd Miss You Still
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 12:42:55 PM AEST
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Phil... This was a very beautiful poem.. I thought that there was a touch of sadness like the longing sadness... This was very deep.. I liked this... Great poem..
Take care
Christina |
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Re: I'd Miss You Still
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by heatherslostdreams on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 06:09:30 PM AEST
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lovely and beautiful write! I was very touched by your words
your friend
heather
aka
heatherslostdreams
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Re: I'd Miss You Still
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 25th August 2010 @ 06:06:54 PM AEST
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It's odd, how you can feel this for people, and places. Sometimes both, at the same time. I miss people, but, sorry Andrew, when I miss Oregon... well, let's just say that the beach obscures everyone there...
All kidding aside, a very beautiful poem, Phil.
Take care,
David |
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