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Array ( [sid] => 127435 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My 9 Year Friendship [time] => 2006-10-26 15:17:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I wrote this poem for my two friends. Cathryn and Stephanie. Who just today, lost there friendship.

Friends forever
thats what we had said
but today it turned around
and the roomers spread
we no longer talk
we no longer play
when we see eachother
we tend to look away
a stupid fight
caused this all
9 years of friendship
squished on the wall
all over a boy
or thats what you said
this fight is so stupid
id rather rest my head
Im stuck in between
with nothing to say
no one to trust
i just looked away
tell her this
tell her that
was useless in reparing this patch
for the hole is to big
the arguments to long
and 9 years of friendship
squished on the wall
angry now
for no longer friends
this was the end
no more tv shows
no more games
9 years of friendship
just faded away
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My 9 Year Friendship

Contributed by RandyBabyx3 on Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 03:17:56 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

I wrote this poem for my two friends. Cathryn and Stephanie. Who just today, lost there friendship.

Friends forever
thats what we had said
but today it turned around
and the roomers spread
we no longer talk
we no longer play
when we see eachother
we tend to look away
a stupid fight
caused this all
9 years of friendship
squished on the wall
all over a boy
or thats what you said
this fight is so stupid
id rather rest my head
Im stuck in between
with nothing to say
no one to trust
i just looked away
tell her this
tell her that
was useless in reparing this patch
for the hole is to big
the arguments to long
and 9 years of friendship
squished on the wall
angry now
for no longer friends
this was the end
no more tv shows
no more games
9 years of friendship
just faded away

Copyright © RandyBabyx3 ... [ 2006-10-26 15:17:56]
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Re: My 9 Year Friendship (User Rating: 1 )
by Kevin on Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 03:22:41 PM AEST
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what a wonderful and heartfelt poem. The loss of a friendship is somethin extremely terrible and i can sympathize with you to such an extent, it's scary, and i'm sure there are many others out there who know the feeling. Sometimes you just have to confront the person and talk it out if there's any hope of salvaging what has been lost

-Kevin

Re: My 9 Year Friendship (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 03:54:07 PM AEST
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advice for your friends wells up inside of me, but the fact that they have a friend who cares enough to have written this seems to bode well for their future.Good luck & much peace.

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