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[sid] => 127407
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Thanks For the Biggest Lie
[time] => 2006-10-25 17:44:26
[hometext] => please comment this one... its a poem about my losing a friend that was so much like a sister to me; that didn't die but was mislead, into a world i cannot describe...
[bodytext] => Your here, your gone Ever since the knife cuts so much deeper. Why lie to me I can handle it in my own ways. All the games you played with my head. All the times you said, I love you. Oh, might as well been another stab. Just please let the lie go on alittle longer, So I can breathe alittle longer. Don't let the candle die, Just let it burn my flesh. Today i saw my best friend die, Watched the light leave her eyes, But every now and then see her in the hall. Then, I wrote on the tomb for all to see, Thanks for the biggest lie! I didn't see the hint, Maybe I wasn't watching out, Dropped my guard, But now I see so clearly, My darkest hour that lasted more than a year. All a dream, a lie I didn't see. All a joke and more questions with no answers. What happened here? How did the lies get formed? Why didn't show before I got this far? If you did all over again, How would you change things? Would I come first or just be a shadow on the wall? Would I see the lie, love you more? Oh, what a dream this has been, A mistake I will never forget... My wake up call back to reality, bang, bang. My life ends tonight, I hope you don't mind You didn't seem to before... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 39 [informant] => MandiLee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
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