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Array ( [sid] => 127372 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sweet Emotions Flow [time] => 2006-10-25 00:28:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Someone's knockin' at the door
and I am
so thrilled...
could it be the girl
that I am yearning for,
it would be so cool
to be with her alone
she is the one that I adore.

looking out the window
got a secret
no one knows...
I fantasize about that girl
I pause
and I sigh
as I try not to lose control.

I dream of a gentle breeze
that flows
as we're walking and talking
under a full moon
in a garden of eden
where only lovers go.
Sweet emotions are
whispering...
as cotton candy clouds
drift across the sky,
I saw her sweet lips trembling
after we kissed
and I held her tight.

The radio plays a song
the television is on
anticipation is strong
as I feel emotions ebb and flow...
I wait
for something
a wonderful feeling
that's been slowly building to a crescendo,
Gotta go
Someone's knocking at the door
could it be the one I adore. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 2 [informant] => secretwind [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Sweet Emotions Flow

Contributed by secretwind on Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 12:28:07 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Someone's knockin' at the door
and I am
so thrilled...
could it be the girl
that I am yearning for,
it would be so cool
to be with her alone
she is the one that I adore.

looking out the window
got a secret
no one knows...
I fantasize about that girl
I pause
and I sigh
as I try not to lose control.

I dream of a gentle breeze
that flows
as we're walking and talking
under a full moon
in a garden of eden
where only lovers go.
Sweet emotions are
whispering...
as cotton candy clouds
drift across the sky,
I saw her sweet lips trembling
after we kissed
and I held her tight.

The radio plays a song
the television is on
anticipation is strong
as I feel emotions ebb and flow...
I wait
for something
a wonderful feeling
that's been slowly building to a crescendo,
Gotta go
Someone's knocking at the door
could it be the one I adore.

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2006-10-25 00:28:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Sweet Emotions Flow (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 12:50:30 AM AEST
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This is a very nice write, dreams are wonderful thing. At least you know have a very good ideal of what type of young lady you are looking. I hope that one day your dream will come true, Youngman. May you find peace and joy you seek in your heart.

sadaddy

Re: Sweet Emotions Flow (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 02:07:28 AM AEST
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Wow this is heavenly sweet only if I'm the one you fantasize 'bout.
Big smiles, seriously it's beautifull!
luv, huggs, big ole smiles,
emy
All your sweet writes just reach out-n-grabs that place in my tummy that gets that feeling.

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