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[sid] => 127276
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Falling off a cliff
[time] => 2006-10-23 04:29:09
[hometext] => this peom is about hanging on to the wrong person and then falling out of the relationship not knowing what lays beneath
[bodytext] => Falling off a cliff It's like you're wounded and hanging on a cliff You're trying so hard but your body seems so heavy to left You're hands can no longer hold For the other hand is on that wound You scared to fall so you struggle to stay alive With lost hope you still have some pride You don’t look down You try to stay focused hanging above the ground You wonder how you got there in the first place You wish this part of your life could be erased Your hands are bleeding You're crying but no one can hear you're pleading Still you're not letting go… No you're not going to You want to rise up so bad Up there where things were good way back You don't know what to do How long will you stay hanging there like a fool! No one is there your all alone Surrounded by hills of rocks and stones You can't rise up any more… Seems there's nothing to live for Your hands finally surrender For they can't hold on any longer You're falling now… Waiting to hit the ground… Waiting to face your destiny These few seconds can feel like an eternity ….You finally hit the ground Unconscious… no where to be found You then open your eyes wishing it were all a dream Are u dead? You ask your self as you lay there unable to move or scream Rocks, stones and shades of gray is all you see in a blur Everything around you is black and white for sure Anger, hate, tension, depression, and confusion Broken down trying to find a conclusion You're loosing trust in everything What more can be coming?… Gray clouds in a starless dark night As it starts to rain and thunders while you cry and fight… The pain is too much to bear You pray to god for you know he's fair… To help you pick up your self again Heal your pride and wash off your sins You still have hope … you still want to live This fall wont stop you to live, love and give You now look around for the rain has stopped Your anger is tamed and your tears have dried up You see some grass has grown… Shades of green with some colors of different tones Children running loved ones grinning Where were they all along why couldn’t you feel their being? Your vision is clear you're able to move and walk The wounds still hurt but they won't make me stop… [comments] => 0 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 22 [informant] => saj [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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