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Array ( [sid] => 127267 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Wouldn’t Want Me [time] => 2006-10-22 23:24:37 [hometext] => Inspired by a lot of things really; the 80's music I'm listening to, many females I know, the whole aspect of love and disconnection... [bodytext] => You wouldn’t want me
unless I had the big bucks
a designer suit
and a bunch of cars
so you can take your pick
- to drive today
to do your shopping
God knows you need more shoes
and how dearly you’d love me
if I was the Big Man
- of the company
yet a simple fool
- under your nose
because you have the equality
- of the 1800’s chauvinist
you have no balance
hell, you have no love
not for a man with a wealth of love
but just the other with a fat wallet
so you wouldn’t want me.

22/10/06 [comments] => 6 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 21 [informant] => one-curly-fry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

You Wouldn’t Want Me

Contributed by one-curly-fry on Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 11:24:37 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

You wouldn’t want me
unless I had the big bucks
a designer suit
and a bunch of cars
so you can take your pick
- to drive today
to do your shopping
God knows you need more shoes
and how dearly you’d love me
if I was the Big Man
- of the company
yet a simple fool
- under your nose
because you have the equality
- of the 1800’s chauvinist
you have no balance
hell, you have no love
not for a man with a wealth of love
but just the other with a fat wallet
so you wouldn’t want me.

22/10/06

Copyright Â© one-curly-fry ... [ 2006-10-22 23:24:37]
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Re: You Wouldn’t Want Me (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 11:31:58 PM AEST
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Great write. It is sad that some determine other's wealth only by what they have in the bank.
Peace, Laura

Re: You Wouldn’t Want Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 01:07:48 AM AEST
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Very sad but great writing and unfortunatly true in many cases.
Keep up the awesome writing.
huggs,
emy

Re: You Wouldn’t Want Me (User Rating: 1 )
by spiritwind on Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 11:59:10 AM AEST
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You dont need them either, riches fade, love does not.

SW

Re: You Wouldn’t Want Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 02:20:26 PM AEST
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i dont know what KIND of girls u no....but thats crazy! anyone who wants to date someone just for money and stuff is really selfish and dumb. thats what i think. anyway, great write, its short and to the point. simple but gets the feeling and idea across very well. good write!

Re: You Wouldn’t Want Me (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 10:10:37 PM AEST
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That is an awesome right, sorry to say this could be true.

sadaddy

Re: You Wouldn’t Want Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 05:37:33 PM AEST
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Tim~
So sad and so true. It's called the reality of todays world. I'd prefer to be poor, but happy. Than to be rich and watching my back everytime. May can never buy happiness.
A very well written piece of poetry. Love will find you when you least expect it to...
The best of wishes always.
warm hugs n prayers,
Sue M

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