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Array ( [sid] => 127141 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Swirls of Madness [time] => 2006-10-19 15:58:16 [hometext] => Another lost poem....lost only for a little while though. [bodytext] =>

Mosaic Sun
dripping with blue
black and golden hues.

Globules fall silently
towards the tiled
and cold
sterile
floor.

Landing
in unrecognizable shapes.
Sprawling aimlessly
without care.

Floor black
and white.
Marbled
geometric heaven.
Right angles abound.

Now she swirls in madness.

Penned 2005
Laura Horner [comments] => 5 [counter] => 246 [topic] => 64 [informant] => deadheadpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )

Swirls of Madness

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 03:58:16 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

Mosaic Sun
dripping with blue
black and golden hues.

Globules fall silently
towards the tiled
and cold
sterile
floor.

Landing
in unrecognizable shapes.
Sprawling aimlessly
without care.

Floor black
and white.
Marbled
geometric heaven.
Right angles abound.

Now she swirls in madness.

Penned 2005
Laura Horner

Copyright © deadheadpoet ... [ 2006-10-19 15:58:16]
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Re: Swirls of Madness (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 04:05:57 PM AEST
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ummmmm...er....reminds me of l.s.d ...lol. filled with visuals..and I've never done L.S. D..so how the hell do I know?..rotfl..

Re: Swirls of Madness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 05:16:26 PM AEST
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Hey sis! This is awesome! Reminds me of certain
Beatles lyrics ... lol

Very ambiguous indeed!! But, OH! the imagery was
magnificent, hun! I'd even say captivating!

Love this one entirely!

~MG

Re: Swirls of Madness (User Rating: 1 )
by Oneir8dude on Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 10:43:31 PM AEST
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PEACE, LOVE and HIPPY BEADS MY FRIEND...

Very nice visual... So beautiful yet so sad..

Thank You Laura... Keep them coming Sister

Bill

Re: Swirls of Madness (User Rating: 1 )
by one-curly-fry on Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 12:38:53 AM AEST
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One of those that kind of leaves you silent, lost in images... Another nice short write..
You've got me thinking of added my older work - I recently stumbled on work from 4 yrs ago... It's quite different... hehe...
I'm gonna have to go write though your work to find your newest stuff! ;o)
Another good write - as always!

- Tim

Re: Swirls of Madness (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 02:22:00 PM AEST
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yes
thanx 4 sharing your maddness

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