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Array ( [sid] => 127130 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => broken love [time] => 2006-10-19 12:51:31 [hometext] => This is for my ex boyfriend max, whom i still love very dearly even though we are just friends [bodytext] => I see him in the same light
And I still feel the same
My knees go weak
When i hear him say my name
His eyes are losing their sparkle
But they'll never lose the shine, that used to always be
In his eyes
My stupitity tore us a part
Now only darkness clouds my heart
We are with different people
I wish we could be together
But i guess things wouldnt be the same
I realize we cant be together
But my feelings will never change [comments] => 3 [counter] => 268 [topic] => 2 [informant] => lipsofanangel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

broken love

Contributed by lipsofanangel on Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 12:51:31 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I see him in the same light
And I still feel the same
My knees go weak
When i hear him say my name
His eyes are losing their sparkle
But they'll never lose the shine, that used to always be
In his eyes
My stupitity tore us a part
Now only darkness clouds my heart
We are with different people
I wish we could be together
But i guess things wouldnt be the same
I realize we cant be together
But my feelings will never change

Copyright © lipsofanangel ... [ 2006-10-19 12:51:31]
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Re: broken love (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 02:04:42 PM AEST
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I'm a great believer in what is meant to be will be.
I guess this is one of those occasion where it wasn't meant to be.
Looking on the bright side, if you are still friends surely that must count for something.

Steve

Re: broken love (User Rating: 1 )
by Craze on Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 05:40:55 PM AEST
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good write

Re: broken love (User Rating: 1 )
by Pain on Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 05:46:00 PM AEST
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sounds like you need to move on he may noy want to be around you just get over it but you had a great description if you need help i do have a therapist whom i promote that may be able to help you
Sincerely sympathetic,
Toni

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