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Array ( [sid] => 127122 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ecstasy's Chance [time] => 2006-10-19 04:31:30 [hometext] => Not usually a writer of love poetry, but wrote this one some time back... [bodytext] => When I look inside an eye
I sleep inside an ocean
And dream of things to come
But not today

Restlessly I wait
But hopefully I ponder
If ecstasy would care
To chance my way

I dream of a golden shell
That I glanced upon one time
That held a pearl
Of modest Purity

I found it hard to comprehend
A treasure such as I would find
Would bless this inner warmth
On such as me

I only wish I could again
Cast eyes upon this glorious find
If by now, my worth
It has not passed

If past allegiance would not conceal
And memory could slowly heal
Then God may find that love
Is yet my path [comments] => 2 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 2 [informant] => trixxx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Ecstasy's Chance

Contributed by trixxx on Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 04:31:30 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

When I look inside an eye
I sleep inside an ocean
And dream of things to come
But not today

Restlessly I wait
But hopefully I ponder
If ecstasy would care
To chance my way

I dream of a golden shell
That I glanced upon one time
That held a pearl
Of modest Purity

I found it hard to comprehend
A treasure such as I would find
Would bless this inner warmth
On such as me

I only wish I could again
Cast eyes upon this glorious find
If by now, my worth
It has not passed

If past allegiance would not conceal
And memory could slowly heal
Then God may find that love
Is yet my path

Copyright © trixxx ... [ 2006-10-19 04:31:30]
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Re: Ecstasy's Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 04:56:08 AM AEST
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Nicely done, May you find the peace and joy within your heart that you seek.

sadaddy

Re: Ecstasy's Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 02:10:26 AM AEST
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Wow, this is lovely.

Loving the rhythm in particular,
I really like the way the last line of each stanza
is shorter/has less beats than the rest.

Powerful.

Kat.

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