Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 19:17:12 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 127119 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => you said [time] => 2006-10-19 01:04:03 [hometext] => written for my ex who now sits in jail... words i can't say to him but want to all the more title may not fit but... the words are from my heart [bodytext] => You always told me that it was just a crazy thought of mine.
that you would ever be untrue to me.. you loved me too much
you always told me that i had nothing to fear
and as long as i remembered you loved me you'd be right here
but now the truth is out.. you cheated with her
and i'm cold and alone in our bed where we made love every night
you always told me...but you never showed me...

you always said i was the one you wanted
that nothing would stop you from loving me
but were those all just words because with her lies
i was forgotten, left alone and unloved
used and broken to bits and peices.

i wish i had never met you
or heard your evil voice
i wish i could turn back the clock
and had my eyes open to your crock
the crock you made me fall for
the one i fought for
and the one who threw me to the floor..

and how do you fall in love with my sister
my very best friend
and leave me all alone with nothing to defend me.
if thats how you think love should be..
take it all away because i want a real man
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 361 [topic] => 75 [informant] => brokenwings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

you said

Contributed by brokenwings on Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 01:04:03 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

You always told me that it was just a crazy thought of mine.
that you would ever be untrue to me.. you loved me too much
you always told me that i had nothing to fear
and as long as i remembered you loved me you'd be right here
but now the truth is out.. you cheated with her
and i'm cold and alone in our bed where we made love every night
you always told me...but you never showed me...

you always said i was the one you wanted
that nothing would stop you from loving me
but were those all just words because with her lies
i was forgotten, left alone and unloved
used and broken to bits and peices.

i wish i had never met you
or heard your evil voice
i wish i could turn back the clock
and had my eyes open to your crock
the crock you made me fall for
the one i fought for
and the one who threw me to the floor..

and how do you fall in love with my sister
my very best friend
and leave me all alone with nothing to defend me.
if thats how you think love should be..
take it all away because i want a real man

Copyright © brokenwings ... [ 2006-10-19 01:04:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: you said (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 05:26:59 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This is very well written. The sadness in your heart is felt as I read this piece. May you one day find the peace and joy within heart that you seek again. You will one day find that right person to fill your heart with overwhelming joy and love.

sadaddy

Re: you said (User Rating: 1 )
by lipsofanangel on Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 07:58:02 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

That is crazy. Beautiful to read but crazy

Re: you said (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 11:44:22 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

i good poem i hope you find your better half

Re: you said (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 02:00:33 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Aww, this is heartbreaking.

*huggles you*

Thanks for sharing, though.
It's good to write your feelings out.

Kat.

Re: you said (User Rating: 1 )
by SerenePsycho on Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 12:25:15 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Well Done. It is vacant and recollective in the beginning. Almost as if you're remembering a dream. It steadily builds emotion until the end. Then you reveal the other woman and all at once you're pulled under by a tidal wave of emotions. This is very sad, but extremely well done. From someone who has been there, keep your chin up.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com