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Array ( [sid] => 127115 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Out at Midday [time] => 2006-10-18 20:27:06 [hometext] => This one is actually not about anyone I've been with... I just got thinking of how relationships change over time. [bodytext] => The golden rays have passed
- my love
I see you now in the washed out midday
- as you see me
the colour has left your face
and I cannot tell if it’s the sun
- or your heart
your eyes hide in the shadow
- of midday
do you still want lunch with me
- like you promised over breakfast
are you still as fresh as your were
- after that coffee I made

Still, those golden rays have passed
- my love
all that we have is washed out midday
- and the dawn of promises
now, I stand, pale and drawn
- fear I’m talking too much
for, I see trouble line your face
- and you will not talk
do you still feel the same
- out in the light
or am I just wasting my time
did you think it would be dawn forever
- or just took a whisper
before seeing my whole image?

10/10/06 [comments] => 3 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 21 [informant] => one-curly-fry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Out at Midday

Contributed by one-curly-fry on Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 08:27:06 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

The golden rays have passed
- my love
I see you now in the washed out midday
- as you see me
the colour has left your face
and I cannot tell if it’s the sun
- or your heart
your eyes hide in the shadow
- of midday
do you still want lunch with me
- like you promised over breakfast
are you still as fresh as your were
- after that coffee I made

Still, those golden rays have passed
- my love
all that we have is washed out midday
- and the dawn of promises
now, I stand, pale and drawn
- fear I’m talking too much
for, I see trouble line your face
- and you will not talk
do you still feel the same
- out in the light
or am I just wasting my time
did you think it would be dawn forever
- or just took a whisper
before seeing my whole image?

10/10/06

Copyright Â© one-curly-fry ... [ 2006-10-18 20:27:06]
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Re: Out at Midday (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 11:30:20 PM AEST
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This was a really good write. I have known the feelings before. When you know things aren't "right" anymore, they don't fit. One must move on because they obviously haven't found that soulmate yet. (and I do believe there is one for every person out there)
Peace, Laura

Re: Out at Midday (User Rating: 1 )
by Leoricx on Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 04:37:38 PM AEST
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Things do change over time. Sometimes they grow stronger and feed off the transformation, finding new levels every day. Othertimes they wither. Unfortunately, we never know which path a relationship is going to take until we start to tread it.

A good write
:D

Re: Out at Midday (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 07:17:19 PM AEST
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again the words you used are just so powerful and clear! awsome write. I think that if more people understood this than there would be a lot less heart-break out there.

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