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Array ( [sid] => 12708 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Alone Forever [time] => 2003-02-16 01:40:00 [hometext] => **** My first dark poem that I wrote came from my freshman year. tell me what you think... ^^ **** [bodytext] => The flames of hell burn my soul
Till all I have left is my heart

Nothing can save you from it
You cant escape it

Demons ravageall that is good left in you
All you know and love is gone

The white-hot sting of evil follows you everywhere you go
Nothing to keep you company but your own pitiful dreams

Alone forever
In the blackness of Hell [comments] => 2 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 13 [informant] => undead_poet14 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Alone Forever

Contributed by undead_poet14 on Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 01:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



The flames of hell burn my soul
Till all I have left is my heart

Nothing can save you from it
You cant escape it

Demons ravageall that is good left in you
All you know and love is gone

The white-hot sting of evil follows you everywhere you go
Nothing to keep you company but your own pitiful dreams

Alone forever
In the blackness of Hell




Copyright © undead_poet14 ... [ 2003-02-16 01:40:00]
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Re: Alone Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 02:42:58 AM AEST
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A very daring poem.. your spirit shines even in the hell. probably your dare devil spirit may even uplift the hell ... from its gloominess ..
awwwh.. all smiles to your talented write .. venkat


Re: Alone Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 02:41:51 PM AEST
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I dont think its to daring but its a goodpoem. Kinda short, but u got your point across well.
Very well written.

Bobo (Joel)




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