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Array ( [sid] => 12707 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Fly Me 2 Saturn on ur Bloody WingZ [time] => 2003-02-16 01:20:00 [hometext] => I wrote this after watching a really good movie! Hope u like it!
(P.S. ur = your) [bodytext] => I’m obsessed w/ the dark hair that hides ur eyez
ur look of suicide
ur nothing 2 u
but everything 2 me
I’ll lie 2 u cuz’ I’m not ur type
u’ll lie to me cuz’ u know I’m right
ur wingz constrict and blind me in ur black light
squirming in pain from the heat of ur heart
ur love can be tamed if u let me inside ur eyez 2 search in the darkness of ur life
until I find ur shattered soul laying upon splintered stakes
bloodied by ur bleeding wrists
I look through self binding glass
that keeps me from helping u
but if I find away to break the glass
break my will
give up my pride
then the glass that separates us will fall away
becuz’ it’s only all the people who would look down on my 4 being w/ u
but I’d kill em all 2 be w/ u
my confession sets me free and the glass leaves
and I step inside ur world
one more demented then my own
I cradle ur head and kiss ur lip ring
I beg u 2 sing to me
I wonder wut draws me 2 u
maybe wild love
free like the falling snow
never knowz where it’ll end up
truth is
none of us know where to go
but the difference between us and the rest of humanity
is we don’t care
well I don’t as long as ur there to bleach my hair
I have secrets only I know
but u insist on me sharing them w/ u
u want a more perfect love than me
more perfect then a dream
my fairy wingz
there black but u bleach them red with ur blood
but not white
don’t make me cry my color away
wash away my fantasies
yes I know that u love me
but u have to remind me
u have 2 fly w/ me 2 another world never seen

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Percursors [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Fly Me 2 Saturn on ur Bloody WingZ

Contributed by Percursors on Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 01:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I’m obsessed w/ the dark hair that hides ur eyez
ur look of suicide
ur nothing 2 u
but everything 2 me
I’ll lie 2 u cuz’ I’m not ur type
u’ll lie to me cuz’ u know I’m right
ur wingz constrict and blind me in ur black light
squirming in pain from the heat of ur heart
ur love can be tamed if u let me inside ur eyez 2 search in the darkness of ur life
until I find ur shattered soul laying upon splintered stakes
bloodied by ur bleeding wrists
I look through self binding glass
that keeps me from helping u
but if I find away to break the glass
break my will
give up my pride
then the glass that separates us will fall away
becuz’ it’s only all the people who would look down on my 4 being w/ u
but I’d kill em all 2 be w/ u
my confession sets me free and the glass leaves
and I step inside ur world
one more demented then my own
I cradle ur head and kiss ur lip ring
I beg u 2 sing to me
I wonder wut draws me 2 u
maybe wild love
free like the falling snow
never knowz where it’ll end up
truth is
none of us know where to go
but the difference between us and the rest of humanity
is we don’t care
well I don’t as long as ur there to bleach my hair
I have secrets only I know
but u insist on me sharing them w/ u
u want a more perfect love than me
more perfect then a dream
my fairy wingz
there black but u bleach them red with ur blood
but not white
don’t make me cry my color away
wash away my fantasies
yes I know that u love me
but u have to remind me
u have 2 fly w/ me 2 another world never seen





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Re: Fly Me 2 Saturn on ur Bloody WingZ (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 07:23:32 PM AEST
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I love this! It's amazing.

~ Moonlit Angel


Re: Fly Me 2 Saturn on ur Bloody WingZ (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 04:09:25 AM AEST
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What a really good write, so dark and beautiful at the same time. Wonderfully written!!!


Re: Fly Me 2 Saturn on ur Bloody WingZ (User Rating: 1 )
by sunflower on Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 11:05:43 AM AEST
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yes, dark and beautiful about a leap of faith in the dark for a lover


Re: Fly Me 2 Saturn on ur Bloody WingZ (User Rating: 1 )
by Bizzy on Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 02:03:28 PM AEST
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Dear Percursor, I'm new to your home page and poetry. First let me explain to you that I am a great-grandma and my tastes don't tend toward dark poetry or the currently used abbreviations, but, I really like your home page and I thought you exhibited unusual skills in expression. I was pleasantly surprised to like parts of your poetry! Bizzy




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