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- now is my turn
the season is how I saw it
- in that crystal ball
dying in her eyes
now no longer the friends I had
limp hair and worn eyes
they fade in meaning
and now I scream out
if I exist, you must exist
for I refuse to believe I’m unique
nothing in the world is new
- just the change of yesterday
yesterday I wasn’t so different
so my moment, my future
- they can’t be so foreign
but the season is how I saw it
friends fall apart
but that’s life
and I still have an ocean of life
and now I scream out
a beacon in the ink of night
- searching for another light
one with the sky full of life
to make a world together
- larger than anything before
lands to rise – full of smiles
taking that formed key
because it’s all possible
that’s how I saw it
- in that crystal ball
dying in her eyes
- and the rest
but that’s life.

4/10/06 [comments] => 2 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 21 [informant] => one-curly-fry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Oceans and Skies

Contributed by one-curly-fry on Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 07:43:08 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I’ve given my chances
- now is my turn
the season is how I saw it
- in that crystal ball
dying in her eyes
now no longer the friends I had
limp hair and worn eyes
they fade in meaning
and now I scream out
if I exist, you must exist
for I refuse to believe I’m unique
nothing in the world is new
- just the change of yesterday
yesterday I wasn’t so different
so my moment, my future
- they can’t be so foreign
but the season is how I saw it
friends fall apart
but that’s life
and I still have an ocean of life
and now I scream out
a beacon in the ink of night
- searching for another light
one with the sky full of life
to make a world together
- larger than anything before
lands to rise – full of smiles
taking that formed key
because it’s all possible
that’s how I saw it
- in that crystal ball
dying in her eyes
- and the rest
but that’s life.

4/10/06

Copyright Â© one-curly-fry ... [ 2006-10-17 19:43:08]
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Re: Oceans and Skies (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 10:01:48 PM AEST
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wow this write reminds me of my poem "after the rain". i think that you and i feel the same way in both of the poems. thats awesome, i love the way you put it! my fav line is, "a beacon in the ink of night, searching for another light" i just love the picture in my mind and the feeling in my heart that i get from reading that! great write! sad but strong!

Re: Oceans and Skies (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 08:34:21 PM AEST
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you might feel like a ship lost at sea searching for teh next lighthouse...but as i see it you are not the titanic, your ship sails on and on just like your heart

never lose hope :-)
i like your poetry, its amazing and i never know what to say after reading it..i feel speechless!
5 stars
*ashley*

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