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Not knowing what the future may bring
And already so much to endure in such a short time,
Hoping it will all soon be better for you me son,
I try to comform you thru the difficulties of your life.

Nothing is clearly set yet known for the life to come
Everything to explore, learn, love and live.
I wish life would take on an easier course for you
A little bit less trouble and hurt and more to enjoy

Life doesnt always go over a bed roses they say
But surely we can have some up's more than down's
When the path takes on a different course,
You realise even more that life itself isnt so strong
In fact, a life going this course is a Fragile Life.

~~Nats~~ [comments] => 4 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 21 [informant] => xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Fragile Life

Contributed by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 04:56:24 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Fragile is the life you hold dear in your hands.
Not knowing what the future may bring
And already so much to endure in such a short time,
Hoping it will all soon be better for you me son,
I try to comform you thru the difficulties of your life.

Nothing is clearly set yet known for the life to come
Everything to explore, learn, love and live.
I wish life would take on an easier course for you
A little bit less trouble and hurt and more to enjoy

Life doesnt always go over a bed roses they say
But surely we can have some up's more than down's
When the path takes on a different course,
You realise even more that life itself isnt so strong
In fact, a life going this course is a Fragile Life.

~~Nats~~

Copyright © xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx ... [ 2006-10-17 16:56:24]
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Re: Fragile Life (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 12:10:45 AM AEST
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Nats, My heart goes out to you and your son. I hope all will go well for him. Please keep us posted....Having kids myself, I cannot imagine the agony this must be for both of you. I wish you peace.
Laura

Re: Fragile Life (User Rating: 1 )
by strawberryshortcake on Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 07:39:00 AM AEST
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i pray for you both. this heartfelt poem is tragically beautiful. so true every word that is written. i have 2 wonderful children myself. thank god every day for each second He allows us to spend together. peace be with you.

Re: Fragile Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 02:13:20 PM AEST
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Sometimes you feel life would be so much easier if someone gave you a script and told you to follow that.
Unfortunately it is never that simple.
I know the troubles you are having right now Nats, your sons health being just one of them.
I wish you well and everyone you hold dear to you

Steve

Re: Fragile Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 05:23:29 PM AEST
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Well, "Nats", these are wise words you have penned here. The sadness , worry, and love flowed directly into this readers heart. I hope all turned out well for you and your son.

Very well done
Roses
Larry

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