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[aid] => mick
[title] => CUT UP _or_ I Wanna Move to Canada, Eh?
[time] => 2006-10-17 15:18:08
[hometext] => Misleading title. Should I change the word 'twisted' to 'sick' in the last line? Just leave some feedback, I like criticism. Sort of like a role-playing poem, because parts of it aren't about me. A couple different things.
[bodytext] => This is just between you and I. you're my friend and you should know But you can't tell anyone, promise? this rumor's life can't glow This is just between you and I It'll be a shell, a mask, it won't be alive long enough to see. Stay trapped in it's clean little casket I've seen you look at me, you know I lie You hate to see me troubled. You know I do something wrong Muted by an air bubble. This is just between us two It's for your eyes only. There's no harm in letting you know there's no way I'll be any less lonely. This is between just us I know you won't let the secret slip You're too dense to see it's serious So you're the one it's safe with You try to play it off, like I'll grow out of it one day but even I can see I'm twisted in every way [comments] => 3 [counter] => 273 [topic] => 71 [informant] => sally-heart-jack [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => secrets )
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