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Array ( [sid] => 127049 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Corporate desire [time] => 2006-10-17 13:37:54 [hometext] => Living in the shadow [bodytext] => Many live the way of them
Pushing down on all that has become
Few know that what we are
Drowned rainbow lack of sun
Inside lies now a pain of creativity
One way street
Restricted Freedom
Hardened run
Push their fingers deep inside
Take away our fears lie us fun
Robots of a world last expire
Salute their rule
Standing tall in their time
Not long now their grasp
Slipping hold
Soon to define
A truth from a new strive
What deserved has just begun
And we struggle no longer
For your pride....

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 21 [informant] => mindset [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Corporate desire

Contributed by mindset on Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 01:37:54 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Many live the way of them
Pushing down on all that has become
Few know that what we are
Drowned rainbow lack of sun
Inside lies now a pain of creativity
One way street
Restricted Freedom
Hardened run
Push their fingers deep inside
Take away our fears lie us fun
Robots of a world last expire
Salute their rule
Standing tall in their time
Not long now their grasp
Slipping hold
Soon to define
A truth from a new strive
What deserved has just begun
And we struggle no longer
For your pride....

Copyright © mindset ... [ 2006-10-17 13:37:54]
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Re: Corporate desire (User Rating: 1 )
by sally-heart-jack on Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 01:57:18 PM AEST
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My favorite favorite line is:

Drowned rainbow lack of sun

It just brings awesome imagery to mind.

Overall, I think this is a pretty original poem bec. you've gripped both a dark feel and a then a more bright, personal feel.

^_^ cool! ^_^

Re: Corporate desire (User Rating: 1 )
by mindset on Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 05:09:21 PM AEST
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Few ever see whats within
That you have done

Thank you

Mindset

xxx

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