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Peaceful for sleeping away the gloom
Freeing the soul of that impending doom
Splish-splash go the rain drops
One by one
Flying from the sky to the ground
Landing,then they're gone
Like the air we breathe
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Rain

Contributed by strawberryshortcake on Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 06:25:43 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Rain on a tin roof
Peaceful for sleeping away the gloom
Freeing the soul of that impending doom
Splish-splash go the rain drops
One by one
Flying from the sky to the ground
Landing,then they're gone
Like the air we breathe
Intoxicatingly beautiful

Copyright © strawberryshortcake ... [ 2006-10-16 18:25:43]
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Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 07:13:36 PM AEST
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I love rain; the sound, the sight..the smell. Thinking of it hittting against a tin roof..making tinking sounds..that took me to a great place~

Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 05:43:27 AM AEST
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What a wonder depiction of rain in such few words. May you have peace and joy in your heart.

sadaddy

Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 02:50:16 PM AEST
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EACH RAIN DROP HAS A SPECIAL MEANING,LIKE THAT OF YOUR EVERY WORD! SHORT & SWEET,JUST AS THE VERY AIR WE BREATHE!! GREAT POEM!!!

DAN!!!!

Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 08:39:10 AM AEST
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I love the rain... This was a great poem... I enjoyed reading it....

Take care
christina

Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 12:25:43 PM AEST
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Excellent compression of language and feeling. A real poetic talent within these words. I will be reading more of your work. Keep the pen flowing.

Well Done

Peace
Yangdantien

Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 02:09:49 PM AEST
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This poem is beauty at it's most innocent stage, i love rain and the warmth this writting portrays only make's me love it more. very lovely presentation along with just the vivid way you crafted this little master peice.

myheartsvoice

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