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Array ( [sid] => 126925 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Wish I Could Title This [time] => 2006-10-14 19:43:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => your charming words don't mean a thing
when I know I have to share them with half the world
how can I still love you this much
when the way you treat me is so unfair and cold

I used to believe in honesty and faith
and you were my proof of everything working out
but as I sit here waiting till it gets late
I know you've gone too far and I've hurt too much
for us to ever turn it around

I wish what I relied on wasn't a picture and a story
I write it in my head for lack of something better
without you I'm free to be straightforward with myself
so I keep returning to this lonely shelter

and things feel like they're on purpose lately
subtle hints and daggers aimed at no one else but me
I got so tangled in thinking I could tame you
but now all I want is for you to set me free
please let me be

I used to believe in honesty and faith
and you were my proof of everything working out
but as I sit here waiting till it gets late
I know you've gone too far and I've hurt too much
for us to ever turn it around [comments] => 5 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 22 [informant] => New_York_Chick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I Wish I Could Title This

Contributed by New_York_Chick on Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 07:43:20 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

your charming words don't mean a thing
when I know I have to share them with half the world
how can I still love you this much
when the way you treat me is so unfair and cold

I used to believe in honesty and faith
and you were my proof of everything working out
but as I sit here waiting till it gets late
I know you've gone too far and I've hurt too much
for us to ever turn it around

I wish what I relied on wasn't a picture and a story
I write it in my head for lack of something better
without you I'm free to be straightforward with myself
so I keep returning to this lonely shelter

and things feel like they're on purpose lately
subtle hints and daggers aimed at no one else but me
I got so tangled in thinking I could tame you
but now all I want is for you to set me free
please let me be

I used to believe in honesty and faith
and you were my proof of everything working out
but as I sit here waiting till it gets late
I know you've gone too far and I've hurt too much
for us to ever turn it around

Copyright © New_York_Chick ... [ 2006-10-14 19:43:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Wish I Could Title This (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 08:29:45 PM AEST
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heartbreak sux. i doesn't matter what you title it...simply the topic you picked says it all.

and i know what it's like...it feels like everything was all a lie...

i like how you explained it though...beautifully, and not so angry like most people. i mean the anger is still there, but it's not as obvious as in most ppl's poems.

loved it,

- Bethani -

Re: I Wish I Could Title This (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 10:05:55 PM AEST
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..fantastic truth my friend.. and the repetitive lines
are most heartfelt-
I wonder a bit about the final stanza>
first line in particular:
"I used to believe in honesty and faith"

>>don't lose that honesty and faith~

great work~

B

B

Re: I Wish I Could Title This (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 12:23:37 AM AEST
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The world is full of charmers
who do little more than weave smooth
words to get what they want.
You can never tame a rattlesnake.
They always bite sooner or later.
Great writing. be careful out there.
Truly , Doug

Re: I Wish I Could Title This (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 01:33:28 AM AEST
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your words have touched me because i just recently got out of a situation where this woudl explain exactly how i was made to feel but now i see i'm better off but it still hurts.. thanks for this write these words touched me..

Re: I Wish I Could Title This (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 08:40:17 AM AEST
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love your style, a beautiful write....

love n' hugs nessa

roses

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