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Array ( [sid] => 126832 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Maybe This is Gravity [time] => 2006-10-12 13:17:40 [hometext] => I'm being happily pulled into the life of an incredible lady and this is how I feel. [bodytext] => We fell asleep, awoke entwined,
This punctured heart is re-aligned,
The junctures that my life will find,
Desire your time and soul, so kind.
My soul it questions, can this be,
A hole that beckons me to be,
A better me, For you to see,
That maybe this is gravity.
You're pulling me into your world,
Your world is full of angels, girl,
Your angel wings embrace, unfurl,
As hidden hopes awake, uncurl.
This head so full of dreams afresh,
Of times with you of happiness,
I'm falling deep, I must confess,
You've got me caught, but I digress,
Awaiting nights of passion, raw,
This heart is waiting, wanting more,
This aching face so battled, scored,
Has found your soul and that's the cure.
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Maybe This is Gravity

Contributed by alasdaircairns on Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 01:17:40 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

We fell asleep, awoke entwined,
This punctured heart is re-aligned,
The junctures that my life will find,
Desire your time and soul, so kind.
My soul it questions, can this be,
A hole that beckons me to be,
A better me, For you to see,
That maybe this is gravity.
You're pulling me into your world,
Your world is full of angels, girl,
Your angel wings embrace, unfurl,
As hidden hopes awake, uncurl.
This head so full of dreams afresh,
Of times with you of happiness,
I'm falling deep, I must confess,
You've got me caught, but I digress,
Awaiting nights of passion, raw,
This heart is waiting, wanting more,
This aching face so battled, scored,
Has found your soul and that's the cure.

Copyright © alasdaircairns ... [ 2006-10-12 13:17:40]
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Re: Maybe This is Gravity (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 01:00:15 AM AEST
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This is a wonderful write. But maybe don't use so many commas.
great write, keep it up!
luvs ya!
.~*Jess*~.

Re: Maybe This is Gravity (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 11:16:33 AM AEST
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Oh thats lovely, pleased your so happy.. Would love a poem like that written for me hope she has seen it. xxx

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