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Array ( [sid] => 126822 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Nightmare [time] => 2006-10-12 07:52:38 [hometext] => this poem is a written experience, i would love to hear your thoughts, and appreciate any comments. thankyou for choosing to read this. [bodytext] => The room, painted bright blue and vibrant
seems dark and fearsome
I smell the odor of a frightened chilled
cold and scared
i see her laid on the bed
unclothed the waist down
the fear and pain reverberating
through her damaged body
she cries tears of a lost soul
her dreams and innocence shattered
lost in a nightmare
to be placed in the depths of her mind

He stands over her, proud and tall
a smile of desired satisfaction
still hangs from the corner of his mouth
he knows what he has done
but he doesn't care
i can hear the crispness of his threat
looming in at her
remember this day
don't speak a word
or let this be your last breath.

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The Nightmare

Contributed by chellebob on Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 07:52:38 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The room, painted bright blue and vibrant
seems dark and fearsome
I smell the odor of a frightened chilled
cold and scared
i see her laid on the bed
unclothed the waist down
the fear and pain reverberating
through her damaged body
she cries tears of a lost soul
her dreams and innocence shattered
lost in a nightmare
to be placed in the depths of her mind

He stands over her, proud and tall
a smile of desired satisfaction
still hangs from the corner of his mouth
he knows what he has done
but he doesn't care
i can hear the crispness of his threat
looming in at her
remember this day
don't speak a word
or let this be your last breath.

Copyright © chellebob ... [ 2006-10-12 07:52:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 08:03:17 AM AEST
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You have expressed this in such a way that to can picture it in your mind which sends chills through me and gives me a since of sad and anger. I am sorry that this experience has happened. May you find peace and joy in your heart again one day.

sadaddy

Re: The Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 08:32:52 PM AEST
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Emotional poetry is a fitting
place for this. You do indeed
spark emotion with your words.
It is sad and sadistic the way
innocence can be taken away.
No one should have to endure
such things. Powerful writing.
Truly , Doug

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