I stood before you …

I stood before you
threadbare and trembling
anticipating your touch
feeling your heat
rise up to greet me ...

Feeling your heat
long before I lowered myself
into your velveteen depths

Your scent alone
was enough to intoxicate me
embolden me,
encourage me,
to slowly,
ever so slowly slide ...

Slide myself inside of you
asking,
pleading,
begging you
to take all of me

Oh, and the feel of you …

The feel of you
all around me
touching me,
caressing me,
enveloping
every square inch of my body

I began to perspire
as every pore upon my flesh
opened itself
unto your administrations

Wet hair clung to the sides of my face
resisting repeated attempts
to brush it aside

My skin began to peel away
as I floated freely
inside of you …

Then for a moment,
for the briefest moment
I felt …
almost
as though we were one

I had been away far too long
and I swore,
I swore
not to keep you
waiting near as long
for my return

I rinsed and toweled off
draining you
stepping slowly away
before turning out
the bathroom lights

… … … … …

Sometimes a bath
it just ...

it just feels …


So right !!!

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The Feel Of You Contributed by Nazmythian on Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 11:15:12 PM in AEST Topic: HumorPoetry I stood before you … I stood before you threadbare and trembling anticipating your touch feeling your heat rise up to greet me ... Feeling your heat long before I lowered myself into your velveteen depths Your scent alone was enough to intoxicate me embolden me, encourage me, to slowly, ever so slowly slide ... Slide myself inside of you asking, pleading, begging you to take all of me Oh, and the feel of you … The feel of you all around me touching me, caressing me, enveloping every square inch of my body I began to perspire as every pore upon my flesh opened itself unto your administrations Wet hair clung to the sides of my face resisting repeated attempts to brush it aside My skin began to peel away as I floated freely inside of you … Then for a moment, for the briefest moment I felt … almost as though we were one I had been away far too long and I swore, I swore not to keep you waiting near as long for my return I rinsed and toweled off draining you stepping slowly away before turning out the bathroom lights … … … … … Sometimes a bath it just ... it just feels … So right !!! ~ Nazmythian ~ Copyright © Nazmythian ... [ 2006-10-11 23:15:12] (Date/Time posted on site) Advertisments: Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem

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Re: The Feel Of You (User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 12:09:28 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Hot mama you had me going! I was like oh my God! Whewwww lol. You my friend are the man!! Your imagination kills me I almost fell off my chair and choked on my darn cookie lol! Ok I'm under controll now, I think! Got bubbles?? ~Michelle~

Re: The Feel Of You (User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 01:01:22 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Shoot fire...that was cleaver as hell. I was like fanning myself thinking ...whooohoooo Shannon, lucky mama *wink*. I got to the end and was like...you sneaky little devil...all that fanning myself over the bathtub. Michelle's right; you the man. Great write. Peace, Laura

Re: The Feel Of You (User Rating: 1 ) by MsCrys on Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 01:56:13 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) LOL I love this one! I was gettin' all hot'n'heavy myself here! Damn! I also really enjoyed reading it for the second time as a bubblebath instead of, well, you know *wink* Excellent work! I'm definitely checking out more of your work!

Re: The Feel Of You (User Rating: 1 ) by LoveStruck_Hippie on Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 08:06:21 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) All I can say is Calgone take me away Loved it sweety ~Shannon

Re: The Feel Of You (User Rating: 1 ) by aniT on Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 01:19:00 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) I love this poem. I think it is funny how it ends up just being a bath. Larica

Re: The Feel Of You (User Rating: 1 ) by Vampirequeen on Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 02:32:20 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Lmao you got really funny imagination I laugh so hard my tummy hurt lol i love this

Re: The Feel Of You (User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 05:58:04 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) You nasty boy you! I thought. . holy HECK!! How did this slip past the censors??? LOLOL You have the wackiest imagination hun. Don't EVER change! This was written soooooooooo well!! You have an amazing talent for double meanings, my friend!! (Shame on you for tricking us like that! lol) Awesome!!! *hugs* ~Breezy (heading to the tub .... lol)

Re: The Feel Of You (User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 12:38:36 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) I bow to Master!!!!!! Awsome job Nazzy! Clever as Heck and worded just right!! One has to go back and read it a second time just to get the full double effect....Incredible!

Re: The Feel Of You (User Rating: 1 ) by Willofree on Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 10:32:32 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Naz, Very clever and deliberate deception, in a positive sense. The influence of innuendo is very effictively demonstrated in this poem. Actually why does it have to be one or the other: why not both....? :) I'll bet you had fun writing this, my friend. Will/Terry

Re: The Feel Of You (User Rating: 1 ) by GAMEchief on Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 08:28:44 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) lmao. Nice one. You got talent.