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[aid] => mick
[title] => Things I wish I could tell you
[time] => 2006-10-11 09:21:43
[hometext] => To my dear poetic friends here at YPDC who post on the Things I wish I could tell You thread
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I am saddened every time the posts I read…
My heart for my friends so deeply bleeds…
The pain you hold inside is not self-soothing…
Every one I read is deeply moving…
My friends I hope you know that if you just spill it…
The ones that caused you pain will know it…
You will feel a great weight removed from your soul…
And you will begin in your heart to fill the hole…
No matter what the outcome of your revelation…
Your pain will release and you will have in your life fortune…
Don’t hold it in… let it out…
Open your lips and begin to shout…
Let them know the pain they have caused…
They’re living their lives with no pause…
No concern and sometimes not knowing…
The pain you’re holding and not showing…
I feel your pain every time I see your words…
To let them live without your pain seems to me so absurd…
If you need to talk to someone else…
You can talk to me and feel yourself…
Much better if not for a moment…
And relieve yourself of your torment…
Release it my friends… Let the sun set on your torment
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Things I wish I could tell you
Contributed by
oneir8dude
on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 09:21:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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I am saddened every time the posts I read…
My heart for my friends so deeply bleeds…
The pain you hold inside is not self-soothing…
Every one I read is deeply moving…
My friends I hope you know that if you just spill it…
The ones that caused you pain will know it…
You will feel a great weight removed from your soul…
And you will begin in your heart to fill the hole…
No matter what the outcome of your revelation…
Your pain will release and you will have in your life fortune…
Don’t hold it in… let it out…
Open your lips and begin to shout…
Let them know the pain they have caused…
They’re living their lives with no pause…
No concern and sometimes not knowing…
The pain you’re holding and not showing…
I feel your pain every time I see your words…
To let them live without your pain seems to me so absurd…
If you need to talk to someone else…
You can talk to me and feel yourself…
Much better if not for a moment…
And relieve yourself of your torment…
Release it my friends… Let the sun set on your torment
Copyright ©
oneir8dude
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2006-10-11 09:21:43]
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Re: Things I wish I could tell you
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 10:53:38 AM AEST
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A very kind and touching write, Bill. With you my friend, reading this, is no surprise....you are a wonderful human being. Thank you for being you.
Peace, Laura |
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by BSteel on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 10:59:35 AM AEST
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wow! this is thought provoking and masterfully striking
sincerly,
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Re: Things I wish I could tell you
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 11:26:27 AM AEST
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You made me cry, a happy cry of course. This is beautiful Bill and I thankyou from the bottom of my heart for your friendships. You know the same goes this direction too I'm always near by!
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Things I wish I could tell you
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by jerseysue on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 12:47:42 PM AEST
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| Kind and heartfelt words from a really good man. This poem shows what real friendship is all about,and how you can understand someones heartache, and will always be there to listen and talk. Your a diamond Bill, your poetry is fantastic, and very thoughtful. Sue x |
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Re: Things I wish I could tell you
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 11th October 2006 @ 01:14:43 PM AEST
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very touching and kind words.
well done
thank you |
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Re: Things I wish I could tell you
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 09:02:36 AM AEST
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This was a very nice poem... I appreciate your kind words and I take them to heart... It helps me to know that people can actually read these poems and feel touched and moved by them....
Take care
christina |
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Re: Things I wish I could tell you
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by emystar on
Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 11:58:15 PM AEST
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hello friend,
U r a man with a very unique heart that isn't afraid to show luv.
u r rare.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Things I wish I could tell you
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by tearstained_soul on
Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 05:04:21 PM AEST
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| this is prctically proof of how good a person you are. HUGS! but i must say... to let someone know how much pain they've caused me.... wow, that's so much easier said then done. |
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Re: Things I wish I could tell you
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 10:54:20 PM AEST
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| I don't think you want to hear it .. LOL. I've been storing it up for years. Not all of it's unhappy..some of it is happy daydreams best left unuttered..sigh. poems inside the heart..unwritten sighs. |
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Re: Things I wish I could tell you
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd January 2015 @ 11:09:30 PM AEST
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Mr Dude, you have a huge heart, my friend.
Nicely done.
Pssst....I'll let ya' in on a little secret. It's not always the "things I Wish I Could Tell You Thread." Nope, quite often it's the "Things I Hope You See and Know It's You Thread"...or somewhere there's abouts. I still post in the dag gummed thread but it's generally directed to those that can no longer respond because they have passed on to the other side.
I enjoyed this.
Thank you.
Tim |
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