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Array ( [sid] => 126750 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You should be put in your place [time] => 2006-10-10 07:25:33 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You only date men who make seventy-five to a hundred grand a year.
Your greed has driven many a man to tears.
You're attractive and at first I thought you had charm.
You refused to date a man because he works on a farm.
When I asked you out, you laughed in my face.
It's about time that you're put in your place.
A man who drives a chevette asked you out and you told him to come back when he can afford a porsche.
Last year you married a man who was a CEO but when he lost his job, you got a divorce.
The corporation he worked for went bankrupt and you said goodbye.
I felt so sorry for him when I saw the pain in his eyes.
There's more to people than money but you only want men with cash.
If I had a whip in my hand, I'd give you a lash.
I know some men who are poor but they have other wonderful qualities.
It's too bad that that's something you can't see. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 6 [informant] => randyjohnson [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

You should be put in your place

Contributed by randyjohnson on Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 07:25:33 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You only date men who make seventy-five to a hundred grand a year.
Your greed has driven many a man to tears.
You're attractive and at first I thought you had charm.
You refused to date a man because he works on a farm.
When I asked you out, you laughed in my face.
It's about time that you're put in your place.
A man who drives a chevette asked you out and you told him to come back when he can afford a porsche.
Last year you married a man who was a CEO but when he lost his job, you got a divorce.
The corporation he worked for went bankrupt and you said goodbye.
I felt so sorry for him when I saw the pain in his eyes.
There's more to people than money but you only want men with cash.
If I had a whip in my hand, I'd give you a lash.
I know some men who are poor but they have other wonderful qualities.
It's too bad that that's something you can't see.

Copyright © randyjohnson ... [ 2006-10-10 07:25:33]
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Re: You should be put in your place (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 02:39:19 PM AEST
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You tell that witch! Well this woman is gonna wake up one day a very lonely old woman.
It is sad that so many place such a value on the dollar we cant take it with us when we go.

Sorry that she hurt you but you dont need that crap to hell with her!!

~Michelle~

Re: You should be put in your place (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 02:45:30 PM AEST
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wow.. i can understand how you feel.. you are way better off without her.. she will get hers.. God takes care of the good people in the world. she sounds like an evil person. i hope she learns but some people never do.. very powerful and sad write..

JENNI

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