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Array ( [sid] => 12668 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => deeds [time] => 2003-02-15 12:00:00 [hometext] => "right" [bodytext] => By day it directs movies of skin,
But at night it fights crime,
buys the comic books before the kids,

No attempt to be blunt,
its quest for salvation has many a front,
Shoving icons down the throats,
plays hate and disgust,

A web of truth for you to see,
That others label insanity,
Like the world you can take a side,
That to is great ploy,

It is a new way of art,
Not your forefathers you could say,
What is that,
Strong-armed the hotdog stands,
So that it could get closer to the dreams,

Of world domination,

An idea of reality it seems,
For its existence is everyday,
With all the simple unseen,
For that is its way,

Described as a potion,
Or fun for the mass,
Mass hysteria if you take it away,

its goals and armadas,
Blanket the sky,
Good with a paradox or riddle,

But you never find your way,
Because it made it that way,
So for you,
You will stay,
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deeds

Contributed by plous on Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

By day it directs movies of skin,
But at night it fights crime,
buys the comic books before the kids,

No attempt to be blunt,
its quest for salvation has many a front,
Shoving icons down the throats,
plays hate and disgust,

A web of truth for you to see,
That others label insanity,
Like the world you can take a side,
That to is great ploy,

It is a new way of art,
Not your forefathers you could say,
What is that,
Strong-armed the hotdog stands,
So that it could get closer to the dreams,

Of world domination,

An idea of reality it seems,
For its existence is everyday,
With all the simple unseen,
For that is its way,

Described as a potion,
Or fun for the mass,
Mass hysteria if you take it away,

its goals and armadas,
Blanket the sky,
Good with a paradox or riddle,

But you never find your way,
Because it made it that way,
So for you,
You will stay,

Copyright © plous ... [ 2003-02-15 12:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: deeds (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 12:59:42 PM AEST
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i like this poem... similar writing style to my own poetry, so i may be biased... thank you for a good read...

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