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Further into the void that is my heart
My mind
My soul
This is crazy
I've become crazy
When did this happen, what did I miss
My life was supposed to be a fairy tale
I would be the princess, surrounded by the people of my land
And every day my prince would make my dreams come true
What happened to my story book
When were my bright and beautiful pictures replaced with dark and frightening words
Words like hate, sorrow, fear, emptiness
Once I was living my dream
Now I die a little every day, in this life that's become a nightmare [comments] => 4 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 65 [informant] => dinolove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

Story Book Nightmare

Contributed by dinolove on Saturday, 7th October 2006 @ 08:34:04 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

I find myself slipping more and more every day
Further into the void that is my heart
My mind
My soul
This is crazy
I've become crazy
When did this happen, what did I miss
My life was supposed to be a fairy tale
I would be the princess, surrounded by the people of my land
And every day my prince would make my dreams come true
What happened to my story book
When were my bright and beautiful pictures replaced with dark and frightening words
Words like hate, sorrow, fear, emptiness
Once I was living my dream
Now I die a little every day, in this life that's become a nightmare

Copyright © dinolove ... [ 2006-10-07 20:34:04]
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Re: Story Book Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by Thunderkidz on Saturday, 7th October 2006 @ 08:40:42 PM AEST
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everybody fells pain and i hope that you arnt going to do anything crazy like. because befor the end we all find what we are looking for and you will find that thing your looking for dont be scared

Re: Story Book Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Sunday, 8th October 2006 @ 01:59:22 AM AEST
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I think a lot of people feel the same, including me. everything will work out, everything will be okay.
luvs ya!
~*Jess*~

Re: Story Book Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by JoeyTrib1550 on Sunday, 8th October 2006 @ 04:09:22 AM AEST
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I really like that poem:)
Though for the people saying that everything will work out just fine...I don't believe in it
But I really hope that it'll turn out good for you guys, I really do
But don't get me wrong, I'm not a selfless guy praying for the good fortunes of others
I'm a selfish guy praying for the good fortunes of others, because if the lifes of others changes for the better, it gives me hope and the strength to get through the day
So hoping to get through a couple of weeks thanks to you guys, all best wishes

with much love and regret, for they can't be seperated,
Marc

Re: Story Book Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by Leoricx on Sunday, 8th October 2006 @ 05:23:04 PM AEST
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You've manage to convey nicely the dark places and feelings we can experience when we realise that we are not where we thought we would be.

I think it's rare that anybody's life goes according to plan - I know for a fact mine didn't other wise I'd be dining on roast venison and caviar every night whilst sipping champagne! :D

Well written.

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