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DON’T
see the people I grew up with. I didn’t think we’d grow apart but life can be so hard to
JUDGE
jury and executioner – it’s what is expected of us nowadays. But it’s not
ME
is a very selfish word. The world would be a better place if everyone recognised this, but that’s a very big
IF
you want to know something you have to ask. Perhaps you can help me and perhaps I can help
YOU
reap what you sow. Work hard at life and collect the rewards. Take it easy and you
DON’T
understand what people see when they look this way and I’m not sure I really want to
KNOW
Yourself before you can know others. After all, I’m the one who best knows
ME
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This is me

Contributed by Leoricx on Saturday, 7th October 2006 @ 12:44:57 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

they say not to spend too much time in the sun and so I
DON’T
see the people I grew up with. I didn’t think we’d grow apart but life can be so hard to
JUDGE
jury and executioner – it’s what is expected of us nowadays. But it’s not
ME
is a very selfish word. The world would be a better place if everyone recognised this, but that’s a very big
IF
you want to know something you have to ask. Perhaps you can help me and perhaps I can help
YOU
reap what you sow. Work hard at life and collect the rewards. Take it easy and you
DON’T
understand what people see when they look this way and I’m not sure I really want to
KNOW
Yourself before you can know others. After all, I’m the one who best knows
ME

Copyright Â© Leoricx ... [ 2006-10-07 12:44:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: This is me (User Rating: 1 )
by Keilantra on Saturday, 7th October 2006 @ 12:58:54 PM AEST
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i think the formastting on this is very witty. good job.

xXx

~kei

Re: This is me (User Rating: 1 )
by dinolove on Saturday, 7th October 2006 @ 08:37:08 PM AEST
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i saw the bold first, and already i liked it. then I read the whole thing, and I liked it that much more. good job.

Re: This is me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 8th October 2006 @ 03:34:57 AM AEST
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It just jumps put at cha.
good owrk.
huggs,
emy

Re: This is me (User Rating: 1 )
by one-curly-fry on Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 07:16:22 AM AEST
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Very clever - at first like those games kids play where the last word of one person's sentence becomes the first of the next person's, but with the added twist of those words making their own sentence. I really like it. I like how, although you've done it in this way, all the parts still relate. I'd like to see more if you're ever in the mood to write some more.

- Tim

Re: This is me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 8th April 2014 @ 02:34:14 PM AEST
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Now that is just awesome!!! And it has a great message on top of it!

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