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Array ( [sid] => 12660 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => desire (eye of the storm) [time] => 2003-02-15 08:00:00 [hometext] => I never really could understand this poem.
I just got a pen and paper and started writing it took me about 15 seconds to write. It came from somewhere in me that I do not want to re-visit. I think it was a ventilation for my anger, and what I mean for eye of the storm is it's my calming place when everything around me seems dead this one spot is still alive untouchable and pure this spot is a woman. (exiled) [bodytext] => Desire (Eye Of The Storm)

Your lips...Our flesh...Desire,
Clearing way for the smoke,
You are the air I breath when I choke.
Touching you makes me feel alive,
Touching you makes me die inside.
Staring into the night skies,
This bleeding rose pricks at the lies.
Nothing left but the life of a child,
Can't go on living this kind of life.
With this anger building in my mind.
Your name...Those eyes...Desire,
Wishing that I could cry,
Wondering why.....WHY!
Now that I am gone...
Done...whis all this pain and suffering,
remember I will always love you,
your..my..eye of the....storm.
But now don't pray for me!
Wishing you were to dead to cry,
leaving diaries with cryptic entries.
Your hands...Your thighs...Desire,
Your mind...burns all of this fire.
Yet your'e still so cold,
No matter how large the flame.
Not knowing who you are,
Tearing at everything.
Now..that..I am.. gone,
remember....I will always love you,
You are me....love...my pain...my suffering.
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desire (eye of the storm)

Contributed by exiled on Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



Desire (Eye Of The Storm)

Your lips...Our flesh...Desire,
Clearing way for the smoke,
You are the air I breath when I choke.
Touching you makes me feel alive,
Touching you makes me die inside.
Staring into the night skies,
This bleeding rose pricks at the lies.
Nothing left but the life of a child,
Can't go on living this kind of life.
With this anger building in my mind.
Your name...Those eyes...Desire,
Wishing that I could cry,
Wondering why.....WHY!
Now that I am gone...
Done...whis all this pain and suffering,
remember I will always love you,
your..my..eye of the....storm.
But now don't pray for me!
Wishing you were to dead to cry,
leaving diaries with cryptic entries.
Your hands...Your thighs...Desire,
Your mind...burns all of this fire.
Yet your'e still so cold,
No matter how large the flame.
Not knowing who you are,
Tearing at everything.
Now..that..I am.. gone,
remember....I will always love you,
You are me....love...my pain...my suffering.




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Re: desire (eye of the storm) (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 01:31:03 PM AEST
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this poem is amazing... the opposites in certain lines very well written... eerie and beautiful at the same time...


Re: desire (eye of the storm) (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 10:50:45 PM AEST
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This is awesome! I love it. I can relate to some of it. Great write!

~ Moonlit Angel


Re: desire (eye of the storm) (User Rating: 1 )
by exiled on Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 10:41:49 AM AEST
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thank you i really appreciate your input on the poem i will have many more to come soon if you would like to read.


Re: desire (eye of the storm) (User Rating: 1 )
by exiled on Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 10:44:06 AM AEST
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i forgot i have another poem on here called sleeping beauty it is under the name olhip.
i put it on my dads page before i got my own try it i think you will like it.




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