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[aid] => mick
[title] => friendship lost
[time] => 2006-10-05 01:12:01
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[bodytext] => My soul mate but not my lover…
This heart shall never recover
from shallow words and heartless blows
the denial of kindness that you chose
This web of breaks I cannot mend
what can be worse than losing a friend
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friendship lost
Contributed by
goodandevil
on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 01:12:01 AM in AEST
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FriendshipPoetry
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My soul mate but not my lover…
This heart shall never recover
from shallow words and heartless blows
the denial of kindness that you chose
This web of breaks I cannot mend
what can be worse than losing a friend
Copyright ©
goodandevil
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2006-10-05 01:12:01]
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Re: friendship lost
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by The_Unknown on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 01:18:33 AM AEST
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good write, sorry bout the broken friendship.
luvs ya
~*Jess*~ |
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Re: friendship lost
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by The_Unknown on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 01:20:04 AM AEST
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good write, sorry bout the broken friendship.
luvs ya
~*Jess*~ |
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Re: friendship lost
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 01:29:49 AM AEST
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awwww... That's so sad..
I hope everything turns out for the best.
Great write! |
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Re: friendship lost
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by sadaddy on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 01:45:26 AM AEST
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This is a sad write, I hope that you all can work through your problems and become friends again. May you find peace and joy in your heart.
sadaddy |
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Re: friendship lost
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 04:55:49 AM AEST
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Freinds come and go like busses. You can get one for years and years and it is a great relationship. Then things change and you must move on with you life may it be good or bad. Poop happens! in other words find your self new and more responsive friends and enjoy the freshness of this getting to know you faze. Life is hard and so are you. God is a DJ and some times he can play you the worst tune ever but in the end you just have to grin and bare it.
LOVE YOUR WORK
Gazzavision1 |
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Re: friendship lost
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by ever1der on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 04:49:04 PM AEST
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| life is tough..guess we all need to make new friends..move on and all that. It sucks..but there it is. I love your nice short writes..thanks |
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Re: friendship lost
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 07:23:12 PM AEST
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well done
good flow |
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Re: friendship lost
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 08:12:34 PM AEST
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Another stark and raw portrait. I love how short these writes are, yet they portray so much.
I'm sorry to hear about losing your friend.
Hope you find another better one.
*hugglies*
Kat.
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