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What is wrong with the world…
Everyone’s attitudes are unfurled…

I walked up to someone and said hello…
To a guy who looked like a nice fellow…

He looked at me with a blanked expression…
I didn’t want some added attention…

Just a simple hello back would have been fine…
It would not have taken up any of his time…

Just a simple gesture in passing…
Why not send a guy your blessing…

When a person takes time to give you two seconds…
Or maybe extend an arm to shake hands…

Think in your head how you look…
And how little time it would’ve took…

To give it back and move along…
To do otherwise is just so wrong…

Don’t be an ignorant self centered Jackass…
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Donkey Ravine

Contributed by oneir8dude on Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 09:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

What is wrong with the world…
Everyone’s attitudes are unfurled…

I walked up to someone and said hello…
To a guy who looked like a nice fellow…

He looked at me with a blanked expression…
I didn’t want some added attention…

Just a simple hello back would have been fine…
It would not have taken up any of his time…

Just a simple gesture in passing…
Why not send a guy your blessing…

When a person takes time to give you two seconds…
Or maybe extend an arm to shake hands…

Think in your head how you look…
And how little time it would’ve took…

To give it back and move along…
To do otherwise is just so wrong…

Don’t be an ignorant self centered Jackass…

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Re: Donkey Ravine (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 09:24:58 PM AEST
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great poem and the pic is awsome and funny too
sounds like you live in new jersey too
I run into those kinds of people all the time
like if they are walking a dog
and i say what kind of dog is that
and they just keep walking as if their dog is too good for you too know lol

great poem i can relate as you see

keep writing i will be reading

Re: Donkey Ravine (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 09:34:59 PM AEST
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Bill, That pic had me LMAO. What a write. Good venting. I can so relate to this with other folks. People can be rude as hell. Your last line was a classic, man. I had to smile when I read it.
Peace, Laura

Re: Donkey Ravine (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 10:21:53 PM AEST
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HELOOOOO. LOL. right back atcha! howdy pal.. couldn't be better, and how are you? This is funny..written well and the pic is hilarious..hehe

Re: Donkey Ravine (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 10:47:29 PM AEST
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Very wise, creative writing.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Donkey Ravine (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 11:35:16 PM AEST
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Hello Friend, what a great way of expressing my feelings as well. LOL Of course the wife would have told me “Look sweetie, he looks better than you” LOL not really but the picture is a great expression of your poem. Great Job! Last line says it all. May peace and joy fill your heart.

sadaddy

Re: Donkey Ravine (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 02:20:37 AM AEST
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Hi Bill, Yes understand this poem very well. Its the way of the world I suppose, but not mine. I speak to everyone , typical woman yo might say, but then I love people and talking is what I do well. ha ha Loved the poem, it speaks volumes. Sue x

Re: Donkey Ravine (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 07:10:35 AM AEST
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LOL the pic says it all. Loved the poem itself and your so very right. Iv been running into more jackass than I can count and its not of the four legged sort either, darn ppl!

~Michelle~

Re: Donkey Ravine (User Rating: 1 )
by Kellros on Friday, 13th October 2006 @ 07:53:55 AM AEST
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I found this quite amusing and the comparison hilarious :). But remember sometimes it's not ignorance, a person could be just overwhelmed by things happening or circumstances.

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