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Array ( [sid] => 126493 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dear Doctor, [time] => 2006-10-03 10:14:16 [hometext] => ~nearly died after being sent home with an undiagnosed illness, 3 times~ [bodytext] => Dear Dr,

My skin, looks torn and broken,
people look at me in disgust,
it was just no fault of mine,
it was in the doctors we all trust.

i was sick for days and days
needing help beyond compare,
i went and saw the evil one,
and they just didn't want me there.

In such a situation,
you would think the answer would be found,
but the only way i was helped,
was when i was nearly not around.

heart palpating in my chest,
i could nearly see the light,
please mum, just dont let me die,
i asked her to aid my plight.

in the ambulance i did go,
and when i reached the end,
the evil one who sent me away,
asked why i was here again.

i was rushed into the city,
lost half my arm and leg,
was on life support for long enough,
and had a long, hard treck.

i had to learn to walk again,
to use a fork and knife,
all because of the doctor,
who didn't value my life.

I still have trouble walking,
and i cant use my arm,
but the doctor is still working,
after he caused me all the harm...

~I HATE YOU~ [comments] => 2 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 6 [informant] => teagy03 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Dear Doctor,

Contributed by teagy03 on Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 10:14:16 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Dear Dr,

My skin, looks torn and broken,
people look at me in disgust,
it was just no fault of mine,
it was in the doctors we all trust.

i was sick for days and days
needing help beyond compare,
i went and saw the evil one,
and they just didn't want me there.

In such a situation,
you would think the answer would be found,
but the only way i was helped,
was when i was nearly not around.

heart palpating in my chest,
i could nearly see the light,
please mum, just dont let me die,
i asked her to aid my plight.

in the ambulance i did go,
and when i reached the end,
the evil one who sent me away,
asked why i was here again.

i was rushed into the city,
lost half my arm and leg,
was on life support for long enough,
and had a long, hard treck.

i had to learn to walk again,
to use a fork and knife,
all because of the doctor,
who didn't value my life.

I still have trouble walking,
and i cant use my arm,
but the doctor is still working,
after he caused me all the harm...

~I HATE YOU~




Copyright © teagy03 ... [ 2006-10-03 10:14:16]
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Re: Dear Doctor, (User Rating: 1 )
by annoiosa on Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 11:24:24 AM AEST
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That's awful, I'm so sorry...


Re: Dear Doctor, (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 11:54:33 AM AEST
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Im so very sorry hun. THis is terrible news to hear. Yes sometimes even the doctors dont understand at times and listen to what we are telling them. Work on a full recovery and being well. There are good doctors out there who will help you and care.

~Michelle~




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