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- didn’t it?
when you can and sat by me
in the early pink of dawn
your curly hair, wild, yet perfect even then
your eyes, ever fresh and alive
you talked
and I answered
without words
because words merely hinder the heart
Yes, we loved
- didn’t we?
a love of more than flesh
because that will wither
yet the soul!
That is eternal…
With a faint piano song
- I remembered
I knew I was at home
before the keyboard
you
and the main character
– a chapter of love –
something I had created
and never felt myself
but for that moment of daydreaming
and a lifetime of longing.

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Did We?

Contributed by one-curly-fry on Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 09:16:25 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

It happened a long time ago
- didn’t it?
when you can and sat by me
in the early pink of dawn
your curly hair, wild, yet perfect even then
your eyes, ever fresh and alive
you talked
and I answered
without words
because words merely hinder the heart
Yes, we loved
- didn’t we?
a love of more than flesh
because that will wither
yet the soul!
That is eternal…
With a faint piano song
- I remembered
I knew I was at home
before the keyboard
you
and the main character
– a chapter of love –
something I had created
and never felt myself
but for that moment of daydreaming
and a lifetime of longing.

18/9/06

Copyright Â© one-curly-fry ... [ 2006-10-03 09:16:25]
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Re: Did We? (User Rating: 1 )
by annoiosa on Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 11:26:13 AM AEST
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Awww... :)

Re: Did We? (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 11:37:55 AM AEST
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this was a great read..nice to daydream and yet again, sad.

Re: Did We? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 08:23:56 PM AEST
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Soft and gentle and so beautiful. There is so much
in here I found pleasing .. very sweet write.

keep your daydreams, my friend. They are what brings
our desires; the wants in our heart of heart's to fruition.

Wonderful post.

~Breezy

Re: Did We? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 12:27:02 AM AEST
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How wonderful...
A chapeter of love that shouldn't end.
Great write and a pleasurable read!

Re: Did We? (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 11:36:14 AM AEST
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i hate daydreams because of the feeling you get when you reliz it was just a dream....but i do like your write it was very bitter/sweet, great job.

Re: Did We? (User Rating: 1 )
by Freesia on Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 06:20:35 PM AEST
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so many of us go through so many books looking for our "main character". Hoping one day it will be more than a daydream for us all.
Thanks for inviting us into your world.

Freesia

Re: Did We? (User Rating: 1 )
by one-curly-fry on Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 09:53:22 PM AEST
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Just so ppl know - I actually have written 3 novel sized stories... This is about a female character I created in the first who ended up becoming the dream woman I've always wanted... Pretty sad, I know, but I was in a troubled place at the time and the story helped me define the kind of person that would suit me - unfortunately, she didn't suit the main character - long story! lol

- Tim

Re: Did We? (User Rating: 1 )
by one-curly-fry on Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 09:53:22 PM AEST
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Just so ppl know - I actually have written 3 novel sized stories... This is about a female character I created in the first who ended up becoming the dream woman I've always wanted... Pretty sad, I know, but I was in a troubled place at the time and the story helped me define the kind of person that would suit me - unfortunately, she didn't suit the main character - long story! lol

- Tim

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