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there was a creator with a great design,
to create something beautiful,
a being with a mind.
A pure world with experience to find,
with no disease or a trace of time.
Until one day the "devil" came,
bringing along its negative stain.
As the light was hidden,
and the anger risen,
the devils created their spiritual prisons.
As i see the world for what it is
i've realized that this is it.
The governments "truths" are nothing but *****
so i will stand and raise my fist
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The Devils came

Contributed by being_oflight on Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 10:23:18 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

Once upon a time,
there was a creator with a great design,
to create something beautiful,
a being with a mind.
A pure world with experience to find,
with no disease or a trace of time.
Until one day the "devil" came,
bringing along its negative stain.
As the light was hidden,
and the anger risen,
the devils created their spiritual prisons.
As i see the world for what it is
i've realized that this is it.
The governments "truths" are nothing but *****
so i will stand and raise my fist
and show their facts that were missed

Copyright © being_oflight ... [ 2006-10-02 22:23:18]
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Re: The Devils came (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 10:36:03 PM AEST
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Well if there are things such as devil's...then there has to be a few in the government. Good write.
Peace, Laura

Re: The Devils came (User Rating: 1 )
by Oneir8dude on Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 10:53:43 PM AEST
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Satan is everwhere... In everything... As you said we all need to raise our fists and send him pakin...

Thank You for the fantastic wording in here... I felt this clean to my bones and got my blood pressure up...

Thank You

Bill

Re: The Devils came (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 11:04:33 PM AEST
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I like your views of the goverment
the truth you speak of the world today
well written poem and some cleverness too
keep on writing i will be reading

Re: The Devils came (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 02:37:04 AM AEST
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very creative writing.
huggs,
emy

Re: The Devils came (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 11:30:37 AM AEST
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the recent behaviour in the government..a congressman
getting caught trying to pervet his young pages..shows what really goes on and what kind of people make the laws we live by..devils indeed! good write.

Re: The Devils came (User Rating: 1 )
by Disconnected on Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 01:21:47 AM AEST
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Powerful

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