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Array ( [sid] => 126428 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Within The Silence [time] => 2006-10-01 21:44:16 [hometext] => Dedicated to awkward silences and fleeting moments... [bodytext] => The feeling of incompleteness is sent.
I reached for your hands and I missed again.
I looked into your eyes just as you turned away,
Missed you by a second in the fray.

Words to tell you danced upon my lips,
Just as you pull away, the moment slips
In between our fingers, ever so lost.
Yet another day, the heart’s greater cost.

We’ll never see those moments of “almost”
Until we look back through each other's eyes.
And discover the sweetness
That within those silences lied.
Alas, completeness is what we find.
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Within The Silence

Contributed by Chamaron on Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 09:44:16 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

The feeling of incompleteness is sent.
I reached for your hands and I missed again.
I looked into your eyes just as you turned away,
Missed you by a second in the fray.

Words to tell you danced upon my lips,
Just as you pull away, the moment slips
In between our fingers, ever so lost.
Yet another day, the heart’s greater cost.

We’ll never see those moments of “almost”
Until we look back through each other's eyes.
And discover the sweetness
That within those silences lied.
Alas, completeness is what we find.

Copyright Â© Chamaron ... [ 2006-10-01 21:44:16]
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Re: Within The Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 10:07:37 PM AEST
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Ooooo this would be so difficult. I'm so...I'd have to blab out my feelings...and if ya don't act now....you may never have the chance and then what??? But that's just me. I wish you well, if this is about you. Good thought provoking write.
Peace, Laura

Re: Within The Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 10:13:19 PM AEST
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Very beautifull writing.
huggs,
emy

Re: Within The Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 11:32:41 PM AEST
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lots of emotion and feelings here but you know what they say you only live once
and you control the ride so make it a great one and follow your heart

Re: Within The Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by Winterland on Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 09:25:49 AM AEST
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It seems to me that mixed in with those missed moments are feelings of regret. I thought you did a very good job of capturing the subtle aspects of your topic as well. Very well done!

Jennifer

Re: Within The Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 09:59:50 PM AEST
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Well Chamaron, as a first-time reader of your poetry, I can only say.....wow ! I've longed to read a write that says what my heart is whispering, and your write did it all so well. I feel as though some kind of weight has been lifted off my shoulders, because I can finally put into words the beatings of my heart. You write beautifully, continue to do so, and if you ever write other poems under this category, let me know by pm, so I'll be sure not to miss one.
Great job!
PumpkinPie

Re: Within The Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Thursday, 3rd September 2020 @ 03:11:04 PM AEST
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Very lovely indeed.

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