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Array ( [sid] => 126356 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Patch i tooken away [time] => 2006-09-29 14:53:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It rips and tears
and makes you feel worthless.
You think of an escape not realizing the consquences.
you pick the route to end the mistake.

You believe it's all your fault.
You hope it's not.
You hit and beat yourself down to nothing.

You want it to end.
You need it to end.
But it keeps going
Wishing you're dead
Hoping you are dead
Felling you're dead.

You never understood
why you?
How come?
Why ever?

You ask yourself why it hurts others,
why it happens to others,
why it even excistes.

Why is forces its way into you innocent life.
Why were you effected.
Why will it ever happen?

You hope your life will be gone
so you quietly say so long
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 282 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Mixdtapexr0mance [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Patch i tooken away

Contributed by Mixdtapexr0mance on Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 02:53:31 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

It rips and tears
and makes you feel worthless.
You think of an escape not realizing the consquences.
you pick the route to end the mistake.

You believe it's all your fault.
You hope it's not.
You hit and beat yourself down to nothing.

You want it to end.
You need it to end.
But it keeps going
Wishing you're dead
Hoping you are dead
Felling you're dead.

You never understood
why you?
How come?
Why ever?

You ask yourself why it hurts others,
why it happens to others,
why it even excistes.

Why is forces its way into you innocent life.
Why were you effected.
Why will it ever happen?

You hope your life will be gone
so you quietly say so long

Copyright © Mixdtapexr0mance ... [ 2006-09-29 14:53:31]
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Re: Patch i tooken away (User Rating: 1 )
by annoiosa on Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 03:52:10 PM AEST
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I can remember sometimes feeling like that...but all things happen for a reason...keep your head up :)

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