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[title] => Weak Based Offer
[time] => 2006-09-29 09:20:29
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[bodytext] => Your sweets are made of floss - dissolving too quickly that little note with the word ‘Sorry’ - too thin – it tore love, Ha! you only parrot Shakespeare - messing up the lines and you show your skin to tease - yet I see 40 years hence you’re just another human - spent your money to look good you’re just another human - and didn’t do for learning this, and with your broken promises - you come to me because I dress well - a warm smile the hint of a wider world - in crystal blue eyes a boy with radiating confidence - a beating heart lips always full of kept words - a taken hand to horizons! And still you walk - towards me exposed, tanned mid-drift - lazy and beautiful eyes teeth white like the moon - hiding a forked tongue and still you walk - always approaching never to understand the structure tongue - in my mouth God! How I amuse you - charming, you think but your sweets are still floss - dissolving too quickly your hair becomes limp - in the humid air and time will steal from you - those good looks there will be nothing then - to offer all of this I can see - 40 years hence I stand, placing my drink down - walking away. 25/9/06 [comments] => 3 [counter] => 259 [topic] => 21 [informant] => one-curly-fry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
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