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Array ( [sid] => 12633 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => life without me [time] => 2003-02-14 22:20:00 [hometext] => to my friends... [bodytext] => A life of fear,
A life of pain,
A life of tears,
That fall like rain.

A day has again passed,
It is just one in a never-ending parade,
Life never seems to end,
There is no relief from its harsh realities,

I find no rest,
I find no peace,
Instead I have discovered a deep pain,
That once found, never goes away,

My mind never stops whirling,
It wont give me a break,
The voices there have started screaming again,
They just wont disappear,

Make this life better!
Cant someone please?
Give me some happiness,
Give me some joy,

Take away this life of tears,
Make all my pain go away,
Abolish all my fears,
I wish the tears would stop today.

Too bad it wont get better,
Too bad I cant beat this,
I wish I knew another way,
I wish life would listen.

Im sorry for the pain ive caused,
Im sorry for the anguish,
Im sorry for the sleepless nights,
I hope you will forget them,

Tomorrow when you awaken,
I wont be there to greet you,
Im sorry for the inconvenience,
Who will you eat with today?

You will find someone new,
You always have had many friends,
So maybe you wont miss me,
Maybe you wont really care.

I hope you know its not your fault,
I have no one to blame,
This is just my last resort,
To heal my broken heart.

No one can help me now,
No one even sees,
The helpless look inside my eyes,
That screams for help for me.

Have a good life please,
Grow up and be good,
You will have a good life,
Even without me.
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life without me

Contributed by nightrider on Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 10:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

A life of fear,
A life of pain,
A life of tears,
That fall like rain.

A day has again passed,
It is just one in a never-ending parade,
Life never seems to end,
There is no relief from its harsh realities,

I find no rest,
I find no peace,
Instead I have discovered a deep pain,
That once found, never goes away,

My mind never stops whirling,
It wont give me a break,
The voices there have started screaming again,
They just wont disappear,

Make this life better!
Cant someone please?
Give me some happiness,
Give me some joy,

Take away this life of tears,
Make all my pain go away,
Abolish all my fears,
I wish the tears would stop today.

Too bad it wont get better,
Too bad I cant beat this,
I wish I knew another way,
I wish life would listen.

Im sorry for the pain ive caused,
Im sorry for the anguish,
Im sorry for the sleepless nights,
I hope you will forget them,

Tomorrow when you awaken,
I wont be there to greet you,
Im sorry for the inconvenience,
Who will you eat with today?

You will find someone new,
You always have had many friends,
So maybe you wont miss me,
Maybe you wont really care.

I hope you know its not your fault,
I have no one to blame,
This is just my last resort,
To heal my broken heart.

No one can help me now,
No one even sees,
The helpless look inside my eyes,
That screams for help for me.

Have a good life please,
Grow up and be good,
You will have a good life,
Even without me.

Copyright © nightrider ... [ 2003-02-14 22:20:00]
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Re: life without me (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 03:20:04 PM AEST
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ooh...this is so sad...please don't give in, not just yet, they do care, even if they don't show it...

Re: life without me (User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 09:34:09 PM AEST
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please dont leave me. i lub ya to much as a friend to lose ya! this is a good poem with alot of emotion and and power. i like.

Re: life without me (User Rating: 1 )
by SpreadYourWings on Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 01:45:27 AM AEST
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beautiful poem that put a tear in my eye. I feel that way sometimes too. best of luck to you in the future.

Re: life without me (User Rating: 1 )
by bopeep on Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 12:40:22 PM AEST
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don't give up...please. i know u feel as if no one will care or will eventually forget, but we WONT. your too great of a friend to just leave. just imagine, if you aren't here then who will i be able to talk to about whatever is making me sad. and you know i can't talk to casey about these things. please don't let your light fade away!

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