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Array ( [sid] => 126269 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => innocense [time] => 2006-09-27 10:43:27 [hometext] => Just wishing we humans can smarten the blip up [bodytext] => Innocence

They sing, they play
There’s something about children’s voices
The emotional display
Our feelings go astray
When they sing
In such a beautiful colorful way
A sound that resonates
A delicate beauty
A lullaby with no restraints
A sound so beautiful
A resonance
A tear forms on our face
And for good reason
These children so dear
Sing what we all want life to be
And they so innocently
Don’t know the horror it can be
And we wish they never do
And wish we never did too
And it’s just a hope and a wish
And a prayer
That they never have to
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innocense

Contributed by twbanter on Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 10:43:27 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Innocence

They sing, they play
There’s something about children’s voices
The emotional display
Our feelings go astray
When they sing
In such a beautiful colorful way
A sound that resonates
A delicate beauty
A lullaby with no restraints
A sound so beautiful
A resonance
A tear forms on our face
And for good reason
These children so dear
Sing what we all want life to be
And they so innocently
Don’t know the horror it can be
And we wish they never do
And wish we never did too
And it’s just a hope and a wish
And a prayer
That they never have to

Copyright Â© twbanter ... [ 2006-09-27 10:43:27]
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Re: innocense (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 02:13:15 PM AEST
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I agree with you there
our childrens are the most wonderful creation .I pray and pray everyday that my children never see any of those horrorid things this world is capable of.
anyways great write

Re: innocense (User Rating: 1 )
by poewhit on Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 04:20:45 PM AEST
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Nice poem-BUT- if they grow up innocent they will be child like parents. Not able to teach. They would only be children bring up children. I think this is part of the problem in america. HOLLYWOOD wants you to stay in HIGH SCHOOL all your life and have plastic surgery at 65 to try and be in HIGH SCHOOL.. You see people not acting there respected age.Example; child porn and the sex crimes against children.

Re: innocense (User Rating: 1 )
by poewhit on Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 12:40:47 AM AEST
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Read your message.
I hear where you were comming from.Innocence is bliss. I was sent to VIET NAM and innocence made me a 109 year old man when I returned. I maybe seen a sideroad in your writing that I was commenting on.-- peace

Re: innocense (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 06:05:19 PM AEST
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Very powerful words Tom. It's a sad state of affairs, no?

Too bad life can't be truly like it is seen through the
eyes of a child. I remember those days ...

life ~ so full of possibilities .. how do we lose that?

exceptional write, my friend. Thought stirring to say the least.

~Breezy

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