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Array ( [sid] => 126256 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => still in love with you [time] => 2006-09-27 05:55:25 [hometext] => another heartfelt poem, please read and comment [bodytext] => today I passed you on the street
then my heart fell to my feet

someone new sat by your side
you both looked so satisfied

a picture from our past came slowly stealin'
then I suddenly got this mournful feelin'

unable to take the pain anymore
my heart crumbled down to the floor

there isn't much my heart can do
for it knows that I still love you [comments] => 5 [counter] => 269 [topic] => 22 [informant] => brave_celt [notes] => Edited for spelling as requested. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

still in love with you

Contributed by brave_celt on Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 05:55:25 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

today I passed you on the street
then my heart fell to my feet

someone new sat by your side
you both looked so satisfied

a picture from our past came slowly stealin'
then I suddenly got this mournful feelin'

unable to take the pain anymore
my heart crumbled down to the floor

there isn't much my heart can do
for it knows that I still love you

Copyright © brave_celt ... [ 2006-09-27 05:55:25]
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Re: still in love with you (User Rating: 1 )
by AnastasiaN on Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 09:04:35 AM AEST
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that sucks...if only there were some magic pill that made you stop loving someone hey? but i guess love wouldn't hold the same meaning then if you could just erase it so easily. take care and i hope time is good to you.

Re: still in love with you (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 09:46:42 AM AEST
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I could feel your pain. Good rhyming scheme. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura

Re: still in love with you (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 11:59:31 PM AEST
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I hear ya, but just grab your self by your shoe laces and keep writing this magic as u have the gift.
Someday soon it feel be a little easier to contend with.
huggs, good thoughts,
emy

Re: still in love with you (User Rating: 1 )
by Kami on Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 06:33:03 PM AEST
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I love this, especially since it is how I am feeling at the moment

Re: still in love with you (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 11:16:29 AM AEST
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Hi. I want to say that I can relate to this very easily. I have been in that situation before probably most of us have. It hurts. My ex boyfriend broke up with me to go out with someone else. He would always tell me that he loved me with all of his heart but he had a crush on her. It hurt me. And I had to see them together during school. It was bad.

This was a good well written poem. Very easy to relate to. And I feel your hurt and pain throughout this. This was powerful..

Great poem.
Take care
*hugs*
Christina

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